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  • gasoline

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    @ LivE.LiFe.RanDoM
    YEAHH I mean it kinda limits what you can do with your story when 90% of the time they're at sea, plundering booty hahaha

    that's like me omg I always forget. I think I wrote it down once, like a character description, but throughout the story I kept changing it as I went so it was pointless

    alright, take your time, can't wait to read it :)
    November 21st, 2015 at 01:16am
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    @ gasoline
    I agree. I mean it's all quite cliche and then with the added element of pirates it just makes it even more gimmicky at times -- it all starts to sound the same.

    Thanks! I'll have to wait till I'm done with this story. Otherwise I might get confused. ahaha. I honestly can't keep my own characters straight half the time. Like I never mention eye color because I can't really remember what I assigned everyone. Isn't the horrible? One day I'll look back and check.

    I thought I had finished the chapter to post tonight, but I guess I got sidetracked. Something should be up soon. Fingers crossed.
    November 1st, 2015 at 05:06am
  • gasoline

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    Awww yes you're back! Haha, agreed. Its not so much that pirate stories are bad, I really do like the whole dangerous and deadly romance aspect of it, but Ive never seen any decent summaries that were original enough to make me read em.
    Blow up for both hehe, its gotten quite intense.
    Ahh I see. Well, I would recommend reading the series, I'm sure you will fall in love with that Will, he's a real charmer. And, no no, your Will certainly does live up to my expectations, I adore the way you write him.

    I can't waitt :)
    October 3rd, 2015 at 05:35am
  • s-o-u-l-s

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    Not a problem! I really enjoy it :D Waiting for the next update!!
    January 1st, 2015 at 05:10am
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    @ jacklynnirene
    Ahhh you've got me beaming. Please, feel free to continue. ahaha. Hopefully something will be coming soon. I've practically finished the next chapter -- just need to put the finishing touches on.

    Hmmmn. I'm getting my hair tomorrow. I've been inspired!

    @ shelbyvengeance
    I feel like that's every blossoming love story (for the most part). Isn't it so frustrating? If only people would just say how they feel to one another.

    I'm thinking. Would Alessia be gutsy enough to do such a thing... and what about Tanek? It seems to be like the world is constantly against him. I guess we'll just have to wait and see.
    November 14th, 2014 at 06:15am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    hmm, well I think since they both seem to like each other so much that she should tell him. I'm sure he'd be very happy.
    November 6th, 2014 at 04:25pm
  • jacklynnirene

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    No problem! Its really refreshing to find such a genuinely good story! I read it all in one sitting and I can't wait for more!

    And thanks! When I get my hair done they do a bleach/shampoo mixture (most stylists should know about it) so its less harsh on the hair and still makes it very blond for the bright colors, I started out with small streaks and just keep getting more done. I'm addicted!
    November 6th, 2014 at 06:45am
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    @ shelbyvengeance
    I see you've caught up! And thanks so much, I'm really glad you enjoy it as much as I do(:
    You and me both. I'm thinking Alistair will be returning with some backup. It's hard to turn down one prince, but two? They'll need a name... perhaps The League of United Princes...? I'll have to work on that... ahaha.

    @ horseluv3114
    Definitely! I'd be honored(: Just tell me where and when... or how. I'm guessing it's not on Mibba since I don't see anything. Ahhh, my brilliant skills of deduction. ahaha. I've got quite a bit of school work (unfortunately) but I should definitely be able to take a look sometime this week. I'm so intrigued. What's it about?
    September 25th, 2014 at 04:36am
  • horseluv3114

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    Hey, I have a story that I've been working on for a while, it's only a couple pages, and I was wondering if you would read it for me and tell me what you think?
    September 25th, 2014 at 01:49am
  • shelbyvengeance

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    Thank you. And yes I do enjoy it. I haven't caught up yet, but plan on doing so tonight.
    September 24th, 2014 at 12:00am
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    @ catharsis.
    Oh thank god. Ahaha. That's what I thought, but I will admit I did literally reread the story and the summary like a bajillion times to make sure I didn't miss any glaring statement about it being a gay couple. That would've been embarrassing... and probably would've shamed my AP Lang Comp teacher.
    But yeah! Definitely realistic and very readable. I'm really glad I found you(:
    July 30th, 2014 at 04:59am
  • catharsis.

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    Thank you so much for your comment <3 You definitely got out of it what I wanted my readers to get. :D
    I like making my characters realistic, and since I wouldn't go around shouting about how I'm queer, I don't have my characters do that either.
    July 29th, 2014 at 10:23pm
  • Ronnie Mac

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    I don't know when the last time you were on Mibba was but I wanted to stop by and thank you profusely for something. You see, I don't know if you remember, but you gave me a really great description for the difference between a preface and a prologue, and yes, even an introduction, and I swear, every time I'm writing a new story (or rewriting in the case of Intertwined), I always go back to the comment to differentiate between preface, prologue, and introduction. To me, they're basically the same thing but your description helps to tell me the difference and it's helped massively in the past year, so I wanted to thank you. I don't know if I thanked you last time but I'm doing it again.

    So thank you so much! xxx

    I hope you're doing well. (:

    (If there's any spelling errors, please ignore them, I'm typing fast so I can get back to writing, plus it's almost midnight here.)
    November 21st, 2013 at 05:54am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Review is always good. (:
    July 8th, 2012 at 07:16am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Well, I'm hoping Intertwined (Down Into The Lake) is going well except I have to edit it all over again because I didn't seem to get my point across it well enough. I don't know. How are yours going?
    July 7th, 2012 at 09:11pm
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Hi, Amy, I'm Veronica! Nice to meet you. (;
    Haha, yes, they seem to be. That's all thanks to you though. (:
    June 9th, 2012 at 02:35am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    I've only changed her name in the prologue and I already love it, so I'm thanking you again. Really, I'm so glad you suggested it.

    Here: I may have written a little something about you because I'm very grateful. :$
    June 8th, 2012 at 04:59am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Yes. I actually love the name Cordelia. And making her nickname Cora? Brilliant! Oh, I like how your brain works; you're such a genius. Thank you so much for the help. (:
    June 7th, 2012 at 01:05pm
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Oh wow, I had honestly never thought of that. You're a genius, my friend, a genius. I would have never guessed Tanek means immortal. Alright, I'm going to list the ones I found that I really like and could you tell me which one you prefer? I'd really appreciate it because I always get stuck on names and I'd really like to stick to one that I want change ever again.

    Meredith "Protector of the sea" (Celtic)
    Genna "Variant of Jenny. "White wave" (English)
    Kelby "Place by the fountain; spring" (Gaelic)
    Cora "Seething pool" (Scottish) - Although this one doesn't fit my character, I quite like the name Cora. Always have, always will.
    Cordelia "Jewel of the sea" (Welsh)
    June 7th, 2012 at 03:30am
  • Ronnie Mac

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    Thank you so much for clearing that up. I'm actually going to go change that everywhere I have it now.

    Also, which name do you think better suits my female character (the main one, obviously): Bea or Jayme? Personally, I quite like Jayme. I also like it because Poseidon and Jayme sounds better than Bea and Poseidon. I'm just asking though; I'm not sure your opinion will influence my decision because I'm almost dead set on Jayme, but I'm curious to know what you think.
    June 7th, 2012 at 02:55am