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Well I'm glad. If it's no trouble, do you think you could look at a new story/one-shot I have written? It is called The Surface.

If you don't want I will understand but it would mean a lot if you would do this one favor for me.

No, no. It made sense. Sorry to have confused you so.

So, the people in the story, they're famous?

Is that an original story?

Yes, sorry.

I've been with a friend who had just returned from her home town, New Zealand and she said we must spend a few days with each other before she had to return. But don't worry I will read your story in a few days, commenting and I'm sorry it couldn't be any sooner.

I do look foraward to reading what it's about, but may I ask... Who is it about -- famous or original?

Oohhh yay Ima go read it now :D

thank you again for the story comment !
i put up a picture of Matt's house in the author's note of the last chapter, just like you asked, so you can see what it looks like (:

thank you veryyy much for both of the comments (:
i'm glad you like the story.

Your welcome :)

Haha; I will do that right now.

I can't wait; Hopefully more people read it;

You're welcome. I love the story; I really hope you continue it. <3

sure no problem!!

Ahahaa! I don't really have much choice with what my parents see me doing, and it's fine, as long as they don't ask too many questions.

Aww, that's a shame. They were impressed with your idea and everything. Don't worry hun; I'll check it out and comment if I like it.

lol no problem your a really good writer!

Ha, ha. It was such a nice ending - despite the cutting of the umbilical cord. But, yeah I will check out the story, and yes they they liked it.

thanks=)

yeah i have to edit alot lol

sure, leave a comment lol =)