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  • the god of thunder.

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    "just knows its her brother coming"
    "Its" should be "it's."

    "Doesn't take much while friends are around;"
    Did you mean "talk" not "Take"?

    “Playing the part of daughter, friend, sister perfectly she sits in class”
    “sister perfectly, she sits,” I believe it should be. If not, it’s a confusingly phrased sentence.

    I think that's all. The near ending is kind of confusing with "God knows she won't" then the period and "drowning." I hope that helps. ^^
    January 15th, 2008 at 12:08am
  • Mrs. Melting Crayons

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    Neither are we. But you're cool enough to not be on the coast! xD The coast sucks.
    January 15th, 2008 at 12:07am
  • Mrs. Melting Crayons

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    It's six, we're an hour ahead.
    That makes planning so much easier...I sort of expected you to be in Kuwait or Australia or something. xD
    January 15th, 2008 at 12:04am
  • Sheepy

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    You are way more than welcome. It was amazing to read (:
    January 15th, 2008 at 12:03am
  • Mrs. Melting Crayons

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    Central standard time? As in the US? That's good...me and Katie are EST.
    January 15th, 2008 at 12:00am
  • the god of thunder.

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    I want to be asked first, truth be told. It depends. I know not to lie, to her of all people, though I'm very compulsive with lies. I also love to talk. So it'll really depend on what she asks. The only problem is I'm a hesitant speaker. I always want to decide if what I say is the exact thing I want to say.

    Okay, I'll edit in one second. xD You know what's funny? I edit people's stories all the time but I'm not a story editor. Do you know how I can be displayed as one? I don't mind not being shown as one, but I'll be able to help more Mibbians if I'm shown.
    January 14th, 2008 at 11:55pm
  • Mrs. Melting Crayons

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    Just for future reference, what time zone are you in?
    Oh, and we're all going to try to be on in an hour, so we can talk about stuff.
    January 14th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    No wrong. I can look it over; see if I notice anything else, if you'd like. I won't mind.

    And by scared? I'm pretty neutral about it. I want to answer questions, see what she has to say. It's a little dizzy for me, but I'm in an anxous-excitement state, as you may say.
    January 14th, 2008 at 11:43pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    "Suddenly someone knocks on the door and she gasps because she just [[know]] its her brother coming to beat her up again."

    By any chance, did you mean "knows?" Just to let you know.
    January 14th, 2008 at 11:38pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    Thank you. [=

    I've been trying to settle myself with only me and the natural ones around me, and it never fit well enough. Of course, it's been keeping me sane enough, if sane is a true state, but now I need to advance to something higher.
    January 14th, 2008 at 11:37pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    As am I.

    I'm so God damned excited. I have my first therapist meeting tonight; I've been looking for it for months gone by. [x I hope all goes well so Ican get the help I need.
    January 14th, 2008 at 11:29pm
  • the used.

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    Haha, so I've heard. From Spaceboy that is.
    I'mma just stay at home, possibly clean my room, but I doubt it. xD
    January 12th, 2008 at 03:43pm
  • the used.

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    Hell, yeah.
    Thank God for the weekend ^^.
    Any plans? :]
    January 11th, 2008 at 04:55pm
  • the used.

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    No worries, just thought the picture was plain awesome. :]

    Meh, I'm fine. Just tired atm. And you?
    January 8th, 2008 at 11:27pm
  • the god of thunder.

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    A person. People tend to be very disasterous to the human physcololigy, but then again, a single burst of emotion from one being can completely twist one's life around.

    She's sort of that dream I keep having, but now it can come into reality in ignite any nightmares that dare to shake the spotlight. I can only be thankful that life can now take a spin and try to set me back on track.
    January 8th, 2008 at 08:31am
  • the god of thunder.

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    It's beautiful.

    I'm good, I guess I can say. Happy, at least. Or, happier than usual. It's a mixed feeling, like always, but always worth the excitement of it. And that's good. I'm glad.
    January 8th, 2008 at 06:29am
  • the god of thunder.

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    If you mean Johnny The Homicidal Maniac, yes. I admire Jhonen Vasquez's work very deeply; Johnny the Homicidal Maniac being my favorite of his stuff.

    Anyhow. How are you?
    January 8th, 2008 at 06:16am
  • the god of thunder.

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    I saw a signature. It had Bright Eyes in it.

    [Pathetic grin.]
    January 8th, 2008 at 04:03am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    Nah it prolly is shit.
    I'd be honored.
    lol.
    January 1st, 2008 at 05:51am
  • Phantasmagoria

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    i do.
    i just get to scared to to put it up cause of peoples opinions.
    so i quickly delete if i do.


    >__<
    January 1st, 2008 at 05:48am