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Thanks so much for the story comment. :) I really appreciate it!

Thanks for commenting on SALVATION IS NEAR. I'm glad you liked it, and I will for sure revise the sentence structure. Thanks again :D

Thanks so much for the feedback on 'struggle for freedom', I always forget that other readers don't have the whole story line mapped out when they're reading so I often don't explain things clearly. But I'm glad you liked it, thanks again :)

Aw you lucky girl seeing CKY. Did you see them at Soundwave? My friends were there. Didn't see CKY though. I'm angry at them. If I was on their half of the world I would die to get there. Anyways, I'm glad you like the story so far :D

Thanks for the comment on my story. :)

Thank you for your comment on my story. I realize comment swap took you there. :) And I have quite a bit more written out just not updated. I think you will like it.

I'm glad my story ended up being better than you thought it'd be. lol

Thank you for the lovely comment on Burn! <3

thanks for your comment on my story. i hate how the text does that im trying to figure out how to fix it. i really dont know how to use it. :c thanks anywho x

Hey, thanks for your comment on Late Dawns !

Yeah, layouts aren't really my strong point but I tried, haha. Also, I always forget that you guys haven't seen all the chapter's I've written, but you can be sure there will be a little more Frerard in the next chapter. I like to take things slow because I hate fics where Gerard and Frank meet, kiss, have sex and get married within a couple of chapters. So I'm taking it veeerrrrry slow. Also, I have a big twist in the plot coming up soon, and that will need a lot of time to draw out and become more real.

Anyway, glad you enjoyed the story :-)

Hey,

thanks for the lovely story comment on Sing Me To Sleep :D It makes me happy when the first chapter is good enough to convince folk to read on :D

I'm so glad you're enjoying it, let me know your thoughts if you finish it

Yeah, you're not the first, or the last, person to comment on the spacing and it makes perfect sense :) I'll be sure to change that next time around.

~Jack's Creativity

You're welcome:)

I'm glad you read my story even though you're not big on One Direction.

Thanks. (:

Thank you for commenting on Puppy Love! :)

Thanks for the comment on Walk Beside Me, in response to your question I can't tell why Raven got adopted so fast, and no, Jimmy's just stayin there until they restore the orphanage.

Thank you for commenting on I Told You So c:

Hello! I'm afraid it's a bit overdue, but thank you very much for the story comment. I really appreciate it. If there's anything I can ever do for you, don't be a stranger. I owe ya!

Thanks for taking the taking the time to read and comment on Loverboy. Hopefully you'll continue to read. And yeah, I sometimes find myself staring at Nathan Sykes eyesbrows too lol :)

Thanks for the story comment(s)! :)

Thanks fir the comment! :) I know everything happened really fast, it's one of myy weaknesses and Separated was a contest entry and I only had 2 months to write it... I ended up procrastinating for a couple weeks thinking I had time when I really didn't.

But I do have a major issue with things happening too quickly... The really beg events usually happen in the 4th chapter... It's definitely no a good habit... Thank you for the feedback, it is ver much appreciated!

No, the main idea does focus on her and her brother and when I post the next few chapters, which will hopefully be soon, it should give everyone more of an inside about her brother through her eyes. Don't worry, everything will be revealed. I think it's going to be more of a flashback type of story and when she does get to go home for holidays, that's when something will happen that really adds to the summary. I have it planned :D