omfg i know i so did that. i was freaking out over it last night lol. what i did was i wrote that part to be in the future and then ended up putting it in that one and yeah i fucked up lmao. i'll change it. thanks for pointing it out though. i never caught it until after i posted it lol.
i know! that's what i thought, but no. it's a 16 week class condensed into 4 weeks so we're having to work our asses off. yet i have zero inspiration for anything in class and i come home and can't stop writing that story, it's terrible!
i understand lol. i was severly lacking at that at the first part but it's difficult because i have no idea what would be going through a man's head when he's at a place like that haha. and thanks for the comment! : ]
uh like a few days, not a week but a day or two. i tried to put it in there but i think i forgot or couldn't figure out how to do it...i'm not sure lol.
i appreciate the criticism but the comment you left saying not to forget that 'he's oli...and is male', i've been thinking about that a lot. what did you mean? because i think it's something i'm not doing right...he should be more...male lol
Well,
I was reading the part about how she was craving skittles and I was trying to remember why I didn't eat them anymore.
And it's cos they test the dyes and other things on the animals.
And I love animals and it breaks my heart.
Awesome! And your welcome. I've subscribed to the story as well. :) Your a really talented writer. I'm going to check out some of your other stories on here as well.
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