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  • wonderlust queen.

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    heck yes! i'm glad you liked it!
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    June 15th, 2010 at 05:17pm
  • We Will Rise

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    Gah!(:
    You're an amazing story writer!
    June 14th, 2010 at 03:40am
  • HalfJack

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    This story is Nowhere NEAR being finished. It has just begun! :)
    June 11th, 2010 at 11:11am
  • HalfJack

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    Thank you :)
    June 7th, 2010 at 05:31am
  • wonderlust queen.

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    thanks! lol and it's okay. i didn't want to just let it escape that she had been on drugs.
    June 5th, 2010 at 05:45pm
  • Erinnnn.xo

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    no problem and very true, i didn't even think to make that connection.
    June 4th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • KatieYDG

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    No problem :) I'll try to comment every update =)
    May 31st, 2010 at 09:45pm
  • wonderlust queen.

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    omfg i know i so did that. i was freaking out over it last night lol. what i did was i wrote that part to be in the future and then ended up putting it in that one and yeah i fucked up lmao. i'll change it. thanks for pointing it out though. i never caught it until after i posted it lol.
    May 29th, 2010 at 06:10pm
  • wonderlust queen.

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    yeah i know! i laughed at that too! you know how he is over his hair lol
    May 29th, 2010 at 01:08am
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    i know! that's what i thought, but no. it's a 16 week class condensed into 4 weeks so we're having to work our asses off. yet i have zero inspiration for anything in class and i come home and can't stop writing that story, it's terrible!
    May 27th, 2010 at 05:25pm
  • MatchStick

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    :) Thanks for your support in my story , the comments are awesome! :) Thanks for all your encouragement!
    May 26th, 2010 at 12:12pm
  • wonderlust queen.

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    i understand lol. i was severly lacking at that at the first part but it's difficult because i have no idea what would be going through a man's head when he's at a place like that haha. and thanks for the comment! : ]
    May 25th, 2010 at 05:09pm
  • wonderlust queen.

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    uh like a few days, not a week but a day or two. i tried to put it in there but i think i forgot or couldn't figure out how to do it...i'm not sure lol.
    i appreciate the criticism but the comment you left saying not to forget that 'he's oli...and is male', i've been thinking about that a lot. what did you mean? because i think it's something i'm not doing right...he should be more...male lol
    May 24th, 2010 at 08:58pm
  • wonderlust queen.

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    lmao you've got a really good point though.
    thanks for the comment. : ]
    May 19th, 2010 at 08:52pm
  • wonderlust queen.

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    you'll understand why she's a stripper later on lol
    May 19th, 2010 at 12:56am
  • Confide.

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    Pretty much.
    It's considered vandalism, harming an animal.
    Well in California it is.

    Peta just does what they need to do to stop it.
    May 18th, 2010 at 02:32pm
  • Lloyd Christmas

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    Thanks so much for your comment on Wrong =))
    May 18th, 2010 at 12:08pm
  • Confide.

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    Well,
    I was reading the part about how she was craving skittles and I was trying to remember why I didn't eat them anymore.
    And it's cos they test the dyes and other things on the animals.
    And I love animals and it breaks my heart.

    And so do Starburst.
    May 17th, 2010 at 03:16pm
  • CheetahLoveXO

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    Awesome! And your welcome. I've subscribed to the story as well. :) Your a really talented writer. I'm going to check out some of your other stories on here as well.
    May 10th, 2010 at 11:36pm
  • kahlo

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    Hey! :)

    I'm rewriting The Runaway, as promised. Here's the link [in case you wanted to read it]:

    http://stories.mibba.com/read/271522/A-Series-Of-Slightly-Unfortunate-Events/
    May 5th, 2010 at 11:39pm