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  • Robin 'The Sidekick'

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    Thanks so much for the story comment. :) I really appreciate it!
    February 1st, 2013 at 07:31pm
  • owlsongs1989

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    Thanks for commenting on SALVATION IS NEAR. I'm glad you liked it, and I will for sure revise the sentence structure. Thanks again :D
    July 24th, 2012 at 06:34pm
  • pearlhunter

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    Thanks so much for the feedback on 'struggle for freedom', I always forget that other readers don't have the whole story line mapped out when they're reading so I often don't explain things clearly. But I'm glad you liked it, thanks again :)
    July 24th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • FallOutGirl;

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    Aw you lucky girl seeing CKY. Did you see them at Soundwave? My friends were there. Didn't see CKY though. I'm angry at them. If I was on their half of the world I would die to get there. Anyways, I'm glad you like the story so far :D
    July 16th, 2012 at 07:11pm
  • DarlingBacon

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    Thanks for the comment on my story. :)
    July 15th, 2012 at 02:12am
  • kieragladd

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    Thank you for your comment on my story. I realize comment swap took you there. :) And I have quite a bit more written out just not updated. I think you will like it.
    July 11th, 2012 at 06:55pm
  • River Young;

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    I'm glad my story ended up being better than you thought it'd be. lol

    Thank you for the lovely comment on Burn! <3
    July 10th, 2012 at 03:59pm
  • marshallomnipotence

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    thanks for your comment on my story. i hate how the text does that im trying to figure out how to fix it. i really dont know how to use it. :c thanks anywho x
    July 9th, 2012 at 03:07pm
  • katie13

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    Hey, thanks for your comment on Late Dawns !

    Yeah, layouts aren't really my strong point but I tried, haha. Also, I always forget that you guys haven't seen all the chapter's I've written, but you can be sure there will be a little more Frerard in the next chapter. I like to take things slow because I hate fics where Gerard and Frank meet, kiss, have sex and get married within a couple of chapters. So I'm taking it veeerrrrry slow. Also, I have a big twist in the plot coming up soon, and that will need a lot of time to draw out and become more real.

    Anyway, glad you enjoyed the story :-)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 02:14pm
  • JacksCreativity

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    Hey,

    thanks for the lovely story comment on Sing Me To Sleep :D It makes me happy when the first chapter is good enough to convince folk to read on :D

    I'm so glad you're enjoying it, let me know your thoughts if you finish it Very Happy

    Yeah, you're not the first, or the last, person to comment on the spacing and it makes perfect sense :) I'll be sure to change that next time around.

    ~Jack's Creativity Dance
    June 27th, 2012 at 10:52pm
  • Theo Rossi;

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    You're welcome:)
    June 24th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • istealdreams

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    I'm glad you read my story even though you're not big on One Direction.

    Thanks. (:
    June 23rd, 2012 at 06:47am
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    Thank you for commenting on Puppy Love! :)
    June 22nd, 2012 at 10:34pm
  • archivist

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    Thanks for the comment on Walk Beside Me, in response to your question I can't tell why Raven got adopted so fast, and no, Jimmy's just stayin there until they restore the orphanage.
    June 20th, 2012 at 11:19pm
  • yodailicous

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    Thank you for commenting on I Told You So c:
    June 19th, 2012 at 04:52pm
  • StillHearts

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    Hello! I'm afraid it's a bit overdue, but thank you very much for the story comment. I really appreciate it. If there's anything I can ever do for you, don't be a stranger. I owe ya!
    June 19th, 2012 at 02:15am
  • Nathan Sykes.

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    Thanks for taking the taking the time to read and comment on Loverboy. Hopefully you'll continue to read. And yeah, I sometimes find myself staring at Nathan Sykes eyesbrows too lol :)
    June 16th, 2012 at 02:38pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Thanks for the story comment(s)! :)
    June 14th, 2012 at 11:16pm
  • Key to Loneliness

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    Thanks fir the comment! :) I know everything happened really fast, it's one of myy weaknesses and Separated was a contest entry and I only had 2 months to write it... I ended up procrastinating for a couple weeks thinking I had time when I really didn't.

    But I do have a major issue with things happening too quickly... The really beg events usually happen in the 4th chapter... It's definitely no a good habit... Thank you for the feedback, it is ver much appreciated!
    June 13th, 2012 at 05:58am
  • Your Soul Is My High

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    No, the main idea does focus on her and her brother and when I post the next few chapters, which will hopefully be soon, it should give everyone more of an inside about her brother through her eyes. Don't worry, everything will be revealed. I think it's going to be more of a flashback type of story and when she does get to go home for holidays, that's when something will happen that really adds to the summary. I have it planned :D
    June 12th, 2012 at 10:59pm