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If you get a chance, please go check out my new stories Underestimate Me and Death Becomes You. I'd really love some feed back on these. Both are linked in my signature.

Hey. I'm just sending shout outs to everyone whose on my friends list on here. I'm also promoting a story I'm writing too. so if you wouldn't mind, could you maybe check out my new story? It's called the keeper of the stars ((http://stories.mibba.com/read/400595/The-Keeper-of-the-Stars/)) and It's about a werewolf and a falling star, if you're into that kinda stuff.. if not still stop by and check out my other story Reality. It's about a girl who has to decide between what she thinks is a good future, and her past.

Haha, thanks, just got a new one and I'm lovin' it :D So uhm, I'm Astrid. Who are you? :]

Hellow :] Just wanted to tell you that I adore your layout.

Yeah, i know. That situation was definitely flawed, and for that, I apologise. And I also should have really put a date in. This was a flasback, so set before the first chapter. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. <3

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Thanks for reading, I didn't mean to force it on you if that's how it came across. And yes, it's in her POV :)

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Oh! I forgot, if you want to read a bit more on/about 'Nice and Content', then you could check out my poem. It's ideally to be read with the first chapter in mind. You don't have to of course, but if you wanted to maybe get inside Emmis' mind [the poems is in her POV], then you can give it a go ;]

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haha, I wouldn't worry about your writing being worse than mine, mine's atrocious XD
To tell you the truth, I should probably pay more attention at school ;]

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Yay! Haha, thanks for subscribing, and remember that I'm fourteen and it's my first story, so it might suddenly turn shite :D

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Wow! That was amazing feedback, thank you so much. To tell you the truth I came up with the idea yesterday evening and had the first chapter uploaded twenty minutes later XD

hey... idk if you remember me, (I wrote how could this happen to me)
and I was just wanting to tell you about this awesome contest idea
that I had... so please check it out if you have time and if you know
anyone else who liked How Could this happen please feel free to tell
them about it as well... the link is: http://www.mibba.com/forums/topic/post/5446387/#5446387

Hi ^^

Thank you :D
I figured 2 parts would ruin it a bit...
Glad you liked it!! New update I think tomorrow!!

Thank you I should have the third chapter up in a few days

Gah! I am horrible when it comes to responding to these...
Big Brother, if you haven't seen it, is a reality show that takes place during the months of July - August. 14, I think 14, strangers move into a house that is filled with mics and cameras, and they are isolated there. They are competing for a half a million dollars. Each week, there is a Head of Household. They put up two housegests to be evicted to the house. Those two nominess, the HOH, and three other housegets play for a Veto, that can take down one of the nominations and replace it with someone else. Then someone gets evicted. They compete for food, luxeries, safety (HoH and Veto)...ít's pretty great. Each season has a different "twist" and it's pretty great. This season doesn't measure up to the other ones, but it's still great.

And close...it'll all be revealed soon... haha

Ohmygod!! I'm so sorry it took me forever to reply to you!!!
I appreciate your feedback so much! It's great. I'm trying to keep Sophia a bit fucked up, and Ville a bit underlying-ly fucked up. I tried writing Oliver nice, but it didn't fit too well with the story haha. Oh, don't worry. Ville will do something to Oliver soon. There we go, you got a tiny hint at the future!!

Really? That's kind of sweet applying at an art store. Cashier positions are ridiculously easy. The bookstore would probably need you in the fall, too. When my sister was in university, the bookstore was always crammed.

Thanks sweetie...

no, the company said they would send me a
copy of the cover to approve too, but I havent
seen it yet. :) Hopefully I'll get a chance to
post it up some where when I do

I updated!! Finally, ahah. That's so shitty you can't find a job...I have one, but it's nothing too great. I'm a cashier at a very low-end, dusty store. It sounds good! That's the one thing that I think would be cool to take is a class that teaches you about the bible, but in like, a non biased way. I hate when I can never pick up on the references, so not a lot of things make sense. I just finished reading Crank, which was good, and Into The Wild, which I absolutely adore and recommend. It changes your perspective a bit.

That would be horrible, especially because you're young. 19 is young to me. My friend was 17 when he went, and he has the worst authority issues. The bright side to this is that now you're healthy and it worked for you. I would imagine that in rehab there would be people doing the things that aren't allowed. I kind of get what you mean when you say "forbidden" things. I appreciate your feedback so much, you haven no idea!

Oh man, I thought I was just going crazy! I dunno, I hope I'm not wrong, though, that would kind of take away from the legitimacy of a story. Maybe all I remember was going up TO security and never past it...

Oh geeze. @.@ Thank you so much!