Don't get me wrong, I love a good offshoot of the Twilightseries as much as the next girl. And I love me some Jasper Hale (and the gorgeous guy who brought him life, Jackson Rathbone). His character is interesting in a way that is wholly different from Edward. He only wants to be "vegetarian" because he feels the emotions of those he's killing but he lacks the self-control of the others in his...

I know this will only be deleted in the next couple of days, but I just had to get it out of my system. My style of reading other people's works is pretty complimentary. Any criticism I give are balanced with something positive in the story and/or an idea on how to "fix" the issue. However, there are two story writing issues that just drive me crazy. I get itchy even thinking about them.The first...