If you get a chance, please go check out my new stories Underestimate Me and Death Becomes You. I'd really love some feed back on these. Both are linked in my signature.
Hey. I'm just sending shout outs to everyone whose on my friends list on here. I'm also promoting a story I'm writing too. so if you wouldn't mind, could you maybe check out my new story? It's called the keeper of the stars ((http://stories.mibba.com/read/400595/The-Keeper-of-the-Stars/)) and It's about a werewolf and a falling star, if you're into that kinda stuff.. if not still stop by and check out my other story Reality. It's about a girl who has to decide between what she thinks is a good future, and her past.
hi im katlyn! lookin 4 new friends and i found u so.....wats up? ima talk like ur my friend starting now: hey girl! check out my STORY OF UNKNOWN LOVE story! plez! and leave a comment on the story not my profile plez! lol. thankz!
wats up?
Hey. You added me as a friend and I couldn't remember if we'd spoken before or what so I'm just saying hello. I don't know how you're spending your halloween but I'm in watching films because I'm not well. Just watched Monster and now I'm all riled up and angsty, for want of a better word.
What is that stuff on your profile by the way? I don't think rap is really the 'in' thing anymore, if you're having a go at people being trendy. I don't know a lot of rap but from what I've heard it's alright. You probably don't mind it too much either, it's probably a profile filler that I'm reading too much into. Certainly writing too much about.
Anyway, thanks for adding me, bet you wish you hadn't now. Have a good night, ellie
Nothing's wrong with pulling up old stuff. Sometimes your most creative stories and poems come from things scribbled down in the past; insignificant at the time, but now absolutely amazing. But it's pretty obvious that you were trying to put more information in. The story didn't flow very well; really disjointed, with lots of inconsistencies.
I don't really mind, but what do you need help with in particular?
Hey, I'm about to read your story, Music Is the Key to My Heart, but I thought I'd let you know you should change its category. Since it features Syn Gates, it's definitely not an Original Fiction story; it's fanfiction. Just an FYI, since I know Dujo is going around deleting stories labelled wrong. He made a thread especially for it.