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  • Ashlala93

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    Thanks so much for your comment on Gold Stars!

    You did bring up excellent points in your comment, and I was actually wondering if anyone would pull me up on it, so since you did, I'll explain Ville's decisions a bit.

    Ville still feels a strong friendly affection for Jonna, even if he doesn't love her anymore, so yes, he does feel like he owes her the truth. However, his feelings for Aiden are very intense and his main concern is really just to sort things out with her, show her that he's sorry and that he's serious about fixing things with the two of them. So yes, it was a but cruel and it was a bit selfish but, unfortunately, it's just human nature, isn't it? I was going for a believable look at a man so in love he'll do anything to prove that he's worth a second chance. I hope I nailed it, and if not I'm sorry.

    Anyway, thanks again with your comment and please keep up with the constructive criticism. It's how we learn to be effective writers, after all.

    xxx
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    June 6th, 2012 at 12:57pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Hey Jenny<3
    Thanks so much for the story comment & no I won't take long with the second chapter. =]
    September 12th, 2009 at 03:00pm
  • Evan-lee

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    I probably will continue it but if I don't I'll just send you it because it is finished anyway, thanks for the support!
    Evan
    xxx
    August 25th, 2009 at 01:48pm
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    Thanks for the comment, I'm not getting many though so I'm not sure whether I'm goona continue this...thanks anyway
    Evan
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    August 13th, 2009 at 12:05am
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Heyy hun! (:
    Long time no talk.

    How's it going?
    <3
    July 8th, 2009 at 07:12pm
  • Sunnyvale's Queen

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    I just don't download music.
    The only Zepp albums that I don't have are [i]Presence[/i] and [i]The Song Remains the Same[/i] soundtrack.
    May 22nd, 2009 at 07:21pm
  • Sunnyvale's Queen

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    It's impossible for me to choose a favorite, but right now I can't get enough of "Kasmir." :)
    I also really enjoy "When the Levee Breaks", "Misty Mountain Hop", "Whole Lotta Love", "Immigrant Song", "Dazed and Confused", "Fool in the Rain", "The Ocean", "Stairway to Heaven", "Black Dog", "Trampled Under Foot", "Rock and Roll", "The Battle of Evermore", "Moby Dick", "Custard Pie", "All of my Love" and "Good Times Bad Times."
    As far as albums go, my favortie would have to be a tie between the untitled fourth one or [i]Physical Graffitti[/i].
    May 21st, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • Sunnyvale's Queen

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    That's awesome! Zeppelin is pretty much the best band ever and my absolute favorite.
    What's your favorite song from them?
    May 21st, 2009 at 03:18pm
  • Sunnyvale's Queen

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    You like Zeppelin?
    May 20th, 2009 at 08:45pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    lol, many people here have English names :)

    Hehe, how are you?
    x
    May 17th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Haha, Lebanon's a bit of a free country. =]

    It's kinda sad but it has its perks; 15 year olds go clubbing and many kids smoke and drink. It's really common and they could get away with it, you know?

    As for girls, to go clubbing, you just gotta dress older to get in. They only ask for ID in like sophisticated clubs. But even here, a fake ID is easy to get.
    I don't have one, but I've heard.

    Lol.
    May 17th, 2009 at 04:56pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Haha, i was joking. =P

    Glad you're better (:
    I've been gooood.
    But I've been going clubbing a lot lately like twice every weekend.

    Shittt.
    May 16th, 2009 at 10:28pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Where've ya been, missy? ;]
    Hehe, sounds cool. I like kids too!

    Lol, yess.
    What's up, babe?

    x
    May 15th, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    oooh, infectious!
    i'm sorry, babe. Hope you feel better soon! :D
    other than that, how's the job going?

    Life's pretty goooood.
    Everything's great as of now actually but I know that sooner or later, there's something bad waiting to happen around the corner. =/
    Dude, Adam's such a sweetheart! I'm starting to think he's not human! XD
    LOL.

    x
    May 2nd, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    =D

    What's up, Jenny?
    How's life?

    x
    April 28th, 2009 at 09:17pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Thanks for the story comment, love!
    April 28th, 2009 at 07:56am
  • sarcasmic.x

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    It was pretty good!! =D
    I don't remember much, haha. But I do remember having fun with Adam, my bf (:

    Aw, I love doing that kind of stuff.
    How's work been?
    x
    April 25th, 2009 at 11:58am
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Aww.
    Entertain yourself! (:

    Not muchh, about to go shopping for this party I've got tomorrow night...
    What've you been up to, love?
    xx
    April 19th, 2009 at 11:09am
  • sarcasmic.x

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    Sounds like funnnnnn

    Haha, slightly intoxicated right noww
    but its cooooool!

    Lmaoo, what are you up to, love?
    April 13th, 2009 at 10:07pm
  • sarcasmic.x

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    That's cool.

    Yess, I just got back home after spending the weekend in my grandparents' mountain house, so it was pretty good! (:
    How was yours?
    xx
    April 13th, 2009 at 04:38pm