You did bring up excellent points in your comment, and I was actually wondering if anyone would pull me up on it, so since you did, I'll explain Ville's decisions a bit.
Ville still feels a strong friendly affection for Jonna, even if he doesn't love her anymore, so yes, he does feel like he owes her the truth. However, his feelings for Aiden are very intense and his main concern is really just to sort things out with her, show her that he's sorry and that he's serious about fixing things with the two of them. So yes, it was a but cruel and it was a bit selfish but, unfortunately, it's just human nature, isn't it? I was going for a believable look at a man so in love he'll do anything to prove that he's worth a second chance. I hope I nailed it, and if not I'm sorry.
Anyway, thanks again with your comment and please keep up with the constructive criticism. It's how we learn to be effective writers, after all.
It's impossible for me to choose a favorite, but right now I can't get enough of "Kasmir." :)
I also really enjoy "When the Levee Breaks", "Misty Mountain Hop", "Whole Lotta Love", "Immigrant Song", "Dazed and Confused", "Fool in the Rain", "The Ocean", "Stairway to Heaven", "Black Dog", "Trampled Under Foot", "Rock and Roll", "The Battle of Evermore", "Moby Dick", "Custard Pie", "All of my Love" and "Good Times Bad Times."
As far as albums go, my favortie would have to be a tie between the untitled fourth one or [i]Physical Graffitti[/i].
It's kinda sad but it has its perks; 15 year olds go clubbing and many kids smoke and drink. It's really common and they could get away with it, you know?
As for girls, to go clubbing, you just gotta dress older to get in. They only ask for ID in like sophisticated clubs. But even here, a fake ID is easy to get.
I don't have one, but I've heard.
oooh, infectious!
i'm sorry, babe. Hope you feel better soon! :D
other than that, how's the job going?
Life's pretty goooood.
Everything's great as of now actually but I know that sooner or later, there's something bad waiting to happen around the corner. =/
Dude, Adam's such a sweetheart! I'm starting to think he's not human! XD
LOL.
You did bring up excellent points in your comment, and I was actually wondering if anyone would pull me up on it, so since you did, I'll explain Ville's decisions a bit.
Ville still feels a strong friendly affection for Jonna, even if he doesn't love her anymore, so yes, he does feel like he owes her the truth. However, his feelings for Aiden are very intense and his main concern is really just to sort things out with her, show her that he's sorry and that he's serious about fixing things with the two of them. So yes, it was a but cruel and it was a bit selfish but, unfortunately, it's just human nature, isn't it? I was going for a believable look at a man so in love he'll do anything to prove that he's worth a second chance. I hope I nailed it, and if not I'm sorry.
Anyway, thanks again with your comment and please keep up with the constructive criticism. It's how we learn to be effective writers, after all.
xxx
Vixen.