Rustie Vengeance / Comments

Well thank you. And I thought it was obvious that they'd get back together soon. It's only one person I know of who doesn't want to read more. She said that in reality, no girl would use a guy she loved as a sex toy like Lexi's doing to Brian. If that's how she feels about it, it's fine though. But she's like 16. I don't think she's really seen how real heartbreak can affect people though, so I'm not getting upset over it.

I never would've thought you'd think she was too much of a bitch. You pretty much seem to understand what I'm writing haha. But there are people saying she's a major bitch. One person even told me she was unsubscribing because she was too much of a bitch. I just figured I needed to explain. XD

that's a good idea! for real.. just write and see where it takes you. that's what i did for both of my stories. i would get one MAIN idea.. and write around it. half the shit i wrote for Right Here came to me while I was writing it. I had the vision of her, and him.. but the whole them sitting out on the beach, the whole amber stealing her gig thing.. yeah. those just came to me as I was writing. the only ideas i had for that story were her dad and the ending. i just had to get to those parts :P that's my advice. just write and see where it takes you. like now.. i'm five pages into the first chapter of all or nothing.. because i had ONE idea of how i wanted the story to start and now i'm rolling with it. it's pretty great. you'll just have to wait and see ;)

i've listened to their music and i've seen them in concert and all this other stuff, but i hadn't been a huge fan of them. then i found this song on YouTube, it was a version of Staind's "Right Here" by this girl in the bathroom and i started listening to it, and then a bunch of other cover songs and i got this idea for this girl to go on and sing with a band.. so i came up with the ending of Right Here before the actual story.. and then i started listenin to "The River" again and i got the idea for the girl to sing with Avenged.. and thus Right Here became a story! lmao. i'm actually thinking about re-naming the sequel. I'm really not sure. ugh. so confused because i was going to write about The Rev's death, and then I remembered the time frame isn't the same.. so now i've got to re-vamp. this blows. but as far as the whole writing thing goes.. trust me, that's how i felt at first. when i started writing "Shootout" i thought "..this sucks. i can't form ANYTHING and this blows and people hate it." so i just posted the first chapter before i lost my balls and then.. it just kind of blew up. don't think you're a horrible writer.. just go with what feels right!

actually, i'm writing it now. well, at least i started the first chapter last night. i'm gonna wait until i get a few chapters in before i post anything, that way i can continue to update twice a day. i'm gonna wait a few days before i post The Wrong One again, that way I can get caught up and more than one chapter out every few days. but i HAVE started on All or Nothing (:

Right Here Waiting is how i was able to get to writing The Wrong One. lmao. everyone wanted to see another story. I'm writing a sequel to that one, too, so. I've got a lot on my plate. Right now, I'm just trying to get stuff straight as to where I want to go with this story. I mean, I know how it's going to end, but in the middle.. i'm not sure how I want it done and it sucks because I can't bring myself to write if I don't know where I want it to go. So now, I'm just looking for ideas (and staying up past 2 in the morning) and trying to write more. ugh. it sucks :P

thank you very much! there should be more soon :P
you should check out "right here waiting", then. i think you'll like it, too!

It's nothing, really! I was a really good story :D xx

wow! thank you so much for your comment, totally made my day c:

Hello! I hope you can check out this story of mine and that you'll find it to your liking. ^^v http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/451181/Beginning-of-Something/

Oh my God, you are so sweet. Thank you for the comment and I'm going to try to update every Thursday. <3 ~ChaCha.

I actually don't even know how much longer it'll take. I'm only three chapters ahead of what I've posted. But thank you. :)

You'll be frustrated for a while then. Lexi's not just going to dump Ricky anytime soon.

thanks for your comment!

You're welcome and yes you do need patience to improve haha I know i do too and I hope you took some of my help from your JH story to heart. you can start there

Of course you can. Just need to keep trying and improving on your writing by listening to the advice people give you. When I was 13 I was a horrible writer and I just started writing a couple of years ago to relieve the stress and now it's a thing I have to do haha I guess that's why I have so many stories so my stress levels can go down and focus on more than one story

it's nice to hear it since i don't hear it that often. i think you are the second person who told me that haha

Thank you so much. I am so glad that you took the time to tell me that. :) It just gives me the boost to keep writing the stories and finish off strong. I updated Never close our eyes and now working on Come Wake Me up so you need to hold off a while for that to be posted

Well it's worth a try. And I'm glad you liked the Porn Star Dancin' story too

Hey thanks for the story comment :) It is an interesting concept, and that's probably why I picked it as my prompt. Perhaps you could use the same prompt and turn it into a full story? I don't have the time to, nor the inspiration.