Rustie Vengeance / Comments

  • Well thank you. And I thought it was obvious that they'd get back together soon. It's only one person I know of who doesn't want to read more. She said that in reality, no girl would use a guy she loved as a sex toy like Lexi's doing to Brian. If that's how she feels about it, it's fine though. But she's like 16. I don't think she's really seen how real heartbreak can affect people though, so I'm not getting upset over it.
    May 15th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • I never would've thought you'd think she was too much of a bitch. You pretty much seem to understand what I'm writing haha. But there are people saying she's a major bitch. One person even told me she was unsubscribing because she was too much of a bitch. I just figured I needed to explain. XD
    May 15th, 2012 at 03:50am
  • that's a good idea! for real.. just write and see where it takes you. that's what i did for both of my stories. i would get one MAIN idea.. and write around it. half the shit i wrote for Right Here came to me while I was writing it. I had the vision of her, and him.. but the whole them sitting out on the beach, the whole amber stealing her gig thing.. yeah. those just came to me as I was writing. the only ideas i had for that story were her dad and the ending. i just had to get to those parts :P that's my advice. just write and see where it takes you. like now.. i'm five pages into the first chapter of all or nothing.. because i had ONE idea of how i wanted the story to start and now i'm rolling with it. it's pretty great. you'll just have to wait and see ;)
    May 14th, 2012 at 07:26am
  • i've listened to their music and i've seen them in concert and all this other stuff, but i hadn't been a huge fan of them. then i found this song on YouTube, it was a version of Staind's "Right Here" by this girl in the bathroom and i started listening to it, and then a bunch of other cover songs and i got this idea for this girl to go on and sing with a band.. so i came up with the ending of Right Here before the actual story.. and then i started listenin to "The River" again and i got the idea for the girl to sing with Avenged.. and thus Right Here became a story! lmao. i'm actually thinking about re-naming the sequel. I'm really not sure. ugh. so confused because i was going to write about The Rev's death, and then I remembered the time frame isn't the same.. so now i've got to re-vamp. this blows. but as far as the whole writing thing goes.. trust me, that's how i felt at first. when i started writing "Shootout" i thought "..this sucks. i can't form ANYTHING and this blows and people hate it." so i just posted the first chapter before i lost my balls and then.. it just kind of blew up. don't think you're a horrible writer.. just go with what feels right!
    May 14th, 2012 at 06:10am
  • actually, i'm writing it now. well, at least i started the first chapter last night. i'm gonna wait until i get a few chapters in before i post anything, that way i can continue to update twice a day. i'm gonna wait a few days before i post The Wrong One again, that way I can get caught up and more than one chapter out every few days. but i HAVE started on All or Nothing (:
    May 14th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • Right Here Waiting is how i was able to get to writing The Wrong One. lmao. everyone wanted to see another story. I'm writing a sequel to that one, too, so. I've got a lot on my plate. Right now, I'm just trying to get stuff straight as to where I want to go with this story. I mean, I know how it's going to end, but in the middle.. i'm not sure how I want it done and it sucks because I can't bring myself to write if I don't know where I want it to go. So now, I'm just looking for ideas (and staying up past 2 in the morning) and trying to write more. ugh. it sucks :P
    May 13th, 2012 at 08:06am
  • thank you very much! there should be more soon :P
    you should check out "right here waiting", then. i think you'll like it, too!
    May 13th, 2012 at 07:57am
  • It's nothing, really! I was a really good story :D xx
    May 10th, 2012 at 06:05pm
  • wow! thank you so much for your comment, totally made my day c:
    May 9th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • Hello! I hope you can check out this story of mine and that you'll find it to your liking. ^^v http://www.mibba.com/Stories/Read/451181/Beginning-of-Something/
    May 8th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • Oh my God, you are so sweet. Thank you for the comment and I'm going to try to update every Thursday. <3 ~ChaCha.
    May 7th, 2012 at 01:37am
  • I actually don't even know how much longer it'll take. I'm only three chapters ahead of what I've posted. But thank you. :)
    May 5th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • You'll be frustrated for a while then. Lexi's not just going to dump Ricky anytime soon.
    May 5th, 2012 at 05:16am
  • thanks for your comment!
    May 1st, 2012 at 05:01am
  • You're welcome and yes you do need patience to improve haha I know i do too and I hope you took some of my help from your JH story to heart. you can start there
    April 30th, 2012 at 03:29am
  • Of course you can. Just need to keep trying and improving on your writing by listening to the advice people give you. When I was 13 I was a horrible writer and I just started writing a couple of years ago to relieve the stress and now it's a thing I have to do haha I guess that's why I have so many stories so my stress levels can go down and focus on more than one story
    April 29th, 2012 at 09:49pm
  • it's nice to hear it since i don't hear it that often. i think you are the second person who told me that haha
    April 29th, 2012 at 09:27am
  • Thank you so much. I am so glad that you took the time to tell me that. :) It just gives me the boost to keep writing the stories and finish off strong. I updated Never close our eyes and now working on Come Wake Me up so you need to hold off a while for that to be posted
    April 29th, 2012 at 05:43am
  • Well it's worth a try. And I'm glad you liked the Porn Star Dancin' story too
    April 29th, 2012 at 05:17am
  • Hey thanks for the story comment :) It is an interesting concept, and that's probably why I picked it as my prompt. Perhaps you could use the same prompt and turn it into a full story? I don't have the time to, nor the inspiration.
    April 28th, 2012 at 09:35pm