No problem. The second you sent me that first comment asking me to update I knew I had to thank you somehow. :)
And yes, English isn't my first language. I try to be like a Russian spy when it comes to making sure people don't realize it.
Oh, the first chapter is still the same (actually I just deleted it). I literally just finished rewriting it over right now. I'll PM it to you if you want because I know how excited you are and you've seriously gotten me flustered with all your praise. You're too kind.
Oh I know what you mean. A lot of the stories here are so repetitive and unrealistic that they've become my models on how [i]not[/i] to write. I try to be as different as possible with my stories.
Asjfhvbe thank you again. You're too nice.
I'm actually going to repost the first chapter because I rewrote it with a little bit more detail then post the second chapter the next night.