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  • blonde.

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    @ waves
    Haha, thank-you. :)
    June 19th, 2013 at 02:18am
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    Glad I could help and thanks for the comment in Here in Your Arms as well! you're the best okay, lol.
    June 18th, 2013 at 11:19pm
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    @ waves
    Thank-you for telling me! I would love to use that idea sometimes for one of my own stories. And its no problem at all sweetie!
    June 18th, 2013 at 11:01pm
  • slumflower

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    thank you for the comment from comment swap on Bittersweet! i'm really glad to hear you've subscribed, so yeah lol thanks Mr. Green

    And you can adjust the way the chapter titles look by adjusting the things under the tab Chapter, so you can add a shadow like I did, or change the font sizes and justifications and whatnot :)
    June 18th, 2013 at 10:49pm
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything
    No! Not at all. I completely understand!
    June 16th, 2013 at 08:45pm
  • littlebabyanything

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    Well, that's very very good! My friend is still on the roller coaster she's been on for the past 5 years... So I avoid stories about it, is all :)
    I hope you didn't think I was being too critical?
    June 16th, 2013 at 04:00pm
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything
    Oh wow. What a different perspective. My best friend is what really helped me kick the "habit" if you will.
    And thank-you!
    June 16th, 2013 at 11:43am
  • littlebabyanything

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    @ blonde.
    Nonono, not like that, not exactly uncomfortable, just a bit too close to home. Not personally, but my best friend has struggled with it for years.
    Okay, I'll go check it out right away!
    June 16th, 2013 at 01:57am
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything
    Alright, I just posted the first chapter of it.
    Also, the story Can't Afford to Eat was a really personal thing for me because I was basically telling my own story through Penelope in a way and I felt like sharing it. I 'm sorry I made you uncomfortable with it but I completely understand.
    June 16th, 2013 at 01:55am
  • littlebabyanything

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    Hahaha, I doubt I'll be able to... Allthough I have my final exams on Tuesday, and I really should study...
    Oh well.
    I'd love to! I know that feeling, I had a really dry period before Christmas, I didn't write for over a year! It won't ever leave your fingers though. You shouldn't be embarrassed, I've written many a story that was utter crap, you just have to keep going until you find something you like. I'll comment on every chapter if you like. When you write yourself, you start to realize how much it means to have feedback.
    I'm looking forward to reading it. I actually had a look at the story you have up, but I'm really uneasy around eating disorders, so I had to abandon it, sorry.
    Send me the link when you get it up, and I'll take a look. I think I repeated myself a lot here. Tehe
    June 16th, 2013 at 01:06am
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything
    Don't make me wait so long! A few days is much too long to wait for the next chapter.
    And if you wouldn't mind, when I get my story up and running, if you could take a look at it. I have not written in so long and I miss it so much that I decided to start again. I am a bit embarrassed and uneasy about starting up again because I am so rusty at it so a few words of encouragement would really help me and reassure me. Its not up yet but when it is, it will be called Just Friends.
    June 16th, 2013 at 12:50am
  • littlebabyanything

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    It had to be absolutely perfect!
    I'm happy you liked the new one. I'm itching to write the next chapter, but I think I'll let you guys mull over it for a couple of days... If I can contain myself, that is. Nothing is more fun than feeling that your readers really like what you write. I'm writing just as much for you guys as I am myself:)
    I'm relieved you like Angus, I've barely written anything about him! I think that's a good sign. I'm a bit in love myself, actually.
    June 16th, 2013 at 12:36am
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything
    Five hours to compose 81 words! That's writing for you! Smile
    June 15th, 2013 at 11:07pm
  • littlebabyanything

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    @ blonde.
    I want to keep the underspoken feeling in the story, I want the readers to try and figure out the secret on their own. It will get more substantial as time goes, though, I'm currently just working on the general feeling :) The first chapter for instance, i spent like five hours composing 81 words!
    This helped, thank you :) I'll try to get the next one out tomorrow.
    June 11th, 2013 at 01:22am
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything
    I don't have any criticism at all. And I would love to see how the plot thickens before I start making my own assumptions or recommendations of the story. I don't have too much to go off of at this point. I do have to say though, you are doing a good job at leaving a open ended question at the end. For example, I thought to myself at the end of the last chapter, what will happen between their relationship and how is it going to develop? I am excited to see how that goes.
    June 11th, 2013 at 12:38am
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    @ blonde.
    Do you have any thoughts? :) Any questions? I love getting feedback!
    June 11th, 2013 at 12:30am
  • blonde.

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    @ littlebabyanything You're welcome! Don't feel that way at all! It was great!
    June 11th, 2013 at 12:28am
  • littlebabyanything

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    Hi!

    Thank you so much for the only comment i had on this chapter, I was beginning to feel a bit disheartened. I love that you like it :)
    June 11th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • poison and wine.

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    Hi, I like the fact that you like the Civil Wars enough to have Falling lyrics all over your profile. Just wanted to inform you.
    February 4th, 2012 at 05:36pm
  • Rain_2010

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    Can you check out my new one-shot
    It's called Brotherly Love

    Thanks
    November 11th, 2011 at 08:39pm