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Hey, I took your advice for writing in paragraph form. Take a look? I altered the story from it's orginial version.

Hiya! I know that you were a subscriber to my story Curiousity Killed the Cat and I just wanted to spread the word about its sequel: But Satisfaction Brought It Back.
http://stories.mibba.com/read/391106/But-Satisfaction-Brought-It-Back/
I'd really love for some feedback! Thanks!

Thanks so much for such a fast comment! I know I haven't updated in ages, and i'm glad that you're still subscribed to my story! Il love you my dedicated reader!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Don't worry about that lol. I'm so going to have Cammie right along in those book scenes. Trust me.
Someone told me once that when they were watching HP: GoF that when Malfoy was turned into a ferret they totally thought about Cammie standing out their in crowd. Which is kind of awesome that they thought of my story.
So know worries...she'll be there still. Maybe even more so now with everything.

And don't worry. Her, Trisha and Zane are still going to be as close as ever.
:D

Well I'm glad you liked them. And I really don't mean to be narking on my story. But there's a lot that I would change about it and now I get to.

Well she didn't have a story really in SABL. I mean she just followed Malfoy all the time. I never rally gave her her own story. She was like a love-sick puppy following DM everywhere, you know? Cammie never got to grow. She just cried and complained a lot lol.
But now I've made her with a little bit of a back bone, so it'll be a nice change and she wont be as annoying any longer.

I relied a lot on the book when I wrote SABL (which I will, of course do with the new version) but I should have had a story [i]within[/i] the story. She should have been doing something else rather than following Draco everywhere lol. We know what Potter and the rest are doing, and Malfoy pops up once in a while in the books. But why couldn't something else be totally happening with Malfoy and his gang, you know?
:)

Nah, I couldn't do that. I dislike SABL. I've wanted to re-write since the day I finished it.
Cammie irritated me. Actually almost all my character irritated me besides Zane. Also SABL didn't really have a story behind it. I wanted more of a story for Cammie instead of her being just behind the scenes.

Sadly it's going to be very different. But you'll see a lot of similar things.
Like you'll already know about Zane and his father and all that kind of stuff.
But it's different.

Keep in mind though, a lot that happens in this new version would have happened in the SABL sequels.

Both. The characters and the writing (I hope the writing lol)

Yay, I'm glad it a thumbs up.
:D

There will still be funny moments, of course. It is Cammie and Trisha after all. And who are they without annoying Draco, right?
But it will have a more mature feel to it, I think. Or at least I hope.
I wrote SABL a long time ago, a really long time ago. So the feeling of the whole thing will be darker and what not.

So did you like the sneak peek?

I might keep certain things from that. But less loony lol.
:)
It'll be a little more mature, of course. But I will have Cammie still trying to act like the perfect girlfriend after he tells her that he wishes she was.

Theo? She'll be the same. However I'm still waiting for permission from Bree if I can use her and Quice and those guys because they aren't my original characters and all. I'm sure she'll say yes, but I wanted to make sure it's okay with her. But those guys will stay the same because they are her characters and I don't want to make them out of character.

I'll message you the sneak peek then. :)
I'll probably post the first chapter tomorrow because I just finished writing it.

lmao.
Yeah, really really really different.
But yet the same.

Zane will probably be the one that remains the same the most.
Trish will change quite a bit. And Cammie (luckily) will as well.
She less of a Mary Sue, or at least hope.
And her father is more of father, less mean. But he's still kind of absent.

Did you want me to send you a little sneak peek? Just a little one?

Yay I'm glad you like it!
:D

It's going to be really different from the original version. There's going to be similar things, of course. But a lot has changed. There's one twist that you'll never see coming.

But the twist was something I've always had planned since I first wrote SABL. Of course the twist wouldn't have been revealed until sequels later.

So I'm still working on the new version of SABL but I wanted you to be the first to see the new layout and title.

http://stories.mibba.com/read/361614/Little-Secrets/

Thank you.
Feel free to leave me some story comments. (; haha.

It had nothing to do with DM that's for sure it had to do with a different character lol.

but i'm glad I have your support! About the changes and stuff.

:D

I'm actually thinking about renaming it though. I like my titles to have something to do with my stories. And even SABL had a small part to do with the actual story. I just don't like it anymore. Also i was thinking about bumping Cammie up a grade. Maybe make it their 5th year instead of 4th.
It'll Cammie more of story....

but idk...what do you think?

Can't wait for you to see it. :)

I wrote a little bit of it.
:) I already like it a lot more than the older version.

Lol I hope so.
i hope everyone likes the newer version better.