Please update your story! It is amazing!!! I need to see what happens! and Idk why but since the start, I thought maybe Kamen would turn out to be a good guy in the end. lol
I took a quick look at your story and found a few minor errors. I used to be a story editor, and if you'd like I could fix the errors in your story and then send you the "fixed" chapters. It might take a week or so but I'd be willing to if you want me.
yeah, sorry its been taking me ages, I have majorly important exams in less than two weeks, and if i don't do enough studying (which i havn't) then i'm pretty much screwed.