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    I am doing well! I hope you are too!!
    I miss you too it's been a very long time <3
    June 18th, 2014 at 02:17am
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    hope your doing well Jaz
    had a sudden moment of remembrance today
    miss you babe
    x
    June 17th, 2014 at 09:20pm
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    Ikr! xD Sorry for all the comments.
    August 13th, 2012 at 07:17pm
  • QueenofSpades

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    I do not, Angels is my full time all around project xD i've been working on it for like........ ages but always got distracted by one thing or another so now im dead set on finishing and finishing it correctly. lol Its a bit of a obsession now i think.
    Oh noes not the ghost readers! Lol thats alright, i try to comment at least once on every story i read even if its a tad bit of fluff saying "this is really really cool i like it!" just cause i know how excited one gets when there's a little alert saying you have a comment.
    August 9th, 2012 at 01:06am
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    Ah yes, i'm not sure people realize just how important their opinions are xD I try very hard to listen to what my readers say so i can make the story the best it could possibly be. Its getting them to say anything thats the hard part >.>
    August 8th, 2012 at 09:46am
  • QueenofSpades

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    Thank you very much for your comment on my story Angels born of!
    I can tell you put a lot of thought into it an i really appreciate that :D I find what you said about Megan and Jasper to be very interesting actually, the two of them are very similar. Typically i have my co-write do the Jasper chapters as i have trouble defining "Jasper" from "Megan" xD
    i thought about making part two like a straight sequel, but i didn't want to confuse people lol
    August 8th, 2012 at 06:02am
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    We've always had fast internet so thats never been a issue, i guess it took me time to get motivated
    i remember when I started off, I coudnt get the shape of the liner right, or the blending right, I'd put too much on the crease, or the colours woudn't fuse well, I nearly gave up, I was so frustrated.

    My highschool friends turned into my college friends, and I still talk to them all the time, but i've moved on and made new friends at university. They are such class girls, lovely. I guess those friends who want to stick around, will find a way to stick around and not make stupid stupid excuses.
    August 7th, 2012 at 12:57am
  • the4PonyGirls

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    Now, that's an interesting expression, guess I haven't heard any the like. Now you just need to get the inner workingsd of it just right, and figure how tomake the most use of it?
    I guess 400 words would equal a "Dribble-Drabble"?
    Too wide span, and you get all the interesing stories, that never quite take you anywhere, rather then the Excelent once, that take you all the way?
    What you need isn't ever in the TownShip library, you need the Central library. Asking at the local library wouldn't help much?
    Hmm, the crappy stuff isn't even good enough to qualify as land-fill*tease tease*
    When you feel as if you're all messed up, it's the community in which you're supposed to live, that's most commonly the real problem.

    Maybe we could creat a secret inner circle, for the once adicted, who actually do enjoy? *tease tease*
    August 6th, 2012 at 01:29am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Oh god I'm sorry for just now responding; I haven't been home much the past week; my friends are all getting ready to leave for college and I've been spending as much time with them as possible.

    I'm really glad you liked Teal! She comes off a bit Mary-Sue during the first few chapters, but it's intentional. I didn't really enjoy her character during those, but now that I've managed to get to the point where I can crack that, it's all better. I am very fond of writing the dynamic between Julian and Teal; I haven't quite done a story like theirs before.

    Oh, thank you! I'm glad you think the writing is better!! Third person isn't something I'm used to writing in, so it's taking a bit of adjusting.

    Oh lord, the dialogue; I have an awful habit of proofreading that yet still missing mistakes in those areas.
    August 5th, 2012 at 11:51pm
  • the4PonyGirls

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    Most stories you're likely to find, are either crap, or just not to your liking. Just that you may find the once worth reading, from time to time, which's what we're looking for. My 'Stories' are mostly shorter then these comments*tease tease* Picky is good, makes you get out of what you have no use for? It's not about whatthe next guy like to read, it's what you find good literature, but may, or may not enjoy the subject of.
    Oh, *giggles* so unless someone ask, you just read, and leave?
    It's not as if you really miss anything. That's what I think, while I know others would deny it. Sounds like a serious mistake, why Either of you even got there.
    These are all over the mess, wanting this or that glorry. It's always about the glory, but never about the effort it takes to go there. I write because I like to. Maybe I can punsh a point through, or maybe not. If you read it, maybe you'd be chocked over the story, or not*giggles* I'm painting a vastly different picture of the world, compared with what you see before you.
    Maybe I'm not quite as alone, as one would be painting me in that dark corner, in the far end of the world, then?
    Take your time, most of the stories are short. Maybe an average on 400 - 600 words? Some shorter, a few longer. If you start with "Eponey 1", since it's the beginning? That's among the longest, but you gotta start somewhere, or you never get anywhere. *tease tease*
    Most of my stories are posted in a "One Shot" mode, but linked to the next. To rot? I guess I started out like that, over a year ago, then I found the swap, it did more then just inspire, I guess ??
    Putting ink to paper, is like captur9ng the inner demons, thus making them more manageable, once you can actually see them in the flesh?
    Poor replies to the carefull explanation, I guess I can see how that's maddening. Good thing I'm not 1 of these mono-sylabelists.
    Guess I don't need to worry my replies get too wordy, then. good to know.
    Certainly, writing is supposed to be fun. Fun Fun Fun, and then some more fun. Just that, part of it is when someone like the story.
    August 5th, 2012 at 03:57am
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    I learnt from youtube too yo. I learnt from lots of artists on there.. YAYAY!
    bodycare is this cheap shope in england for like toiletries. The body washes and scrubs, and facialstuff there is fabulous, the best actually, but the makeup and nail polishes absolutely suck, its like kids makeup,no pigments, no hold, its plastic lol!

    it is freshining when that happens, opens up so much more you didnt know about yourself, and before it shocks anyone else, you yourself are left in pure and utter shock
    August 2nd, 2012 at 12:45am
  • the4PonyGirls

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    Misunderstandings suck, like nothing else. Just that, some people chose to make these. Better avoide these people, once spotted.
    You rec the stories you imagine others may enjoy reading, because you like the writing style, even if you may not enjoy the subject, while you sub the stories you want to read more of. Nothing bad in doing both, though*giggles*
    Like in the swap, then? can't avoid commentiong in the swap, or you're out so fast, you did not know it.
    I guess that's good, since it only 'preserve' the bad taste, if you do it alone, and in a bad mood.
    There are several possible reasons for this. Tried different brnds? Still, there is always the chance you actually havce some kind of intolerance towards these beverages too. Which makes it twice as important not to drink more then you actually need to get in the desired mood.
    Beeing shy, trying to hide from yourself, you may unconsciously feel bad about what you're about to do, once you've had the drink too?
    Quite interesting personal quirk there.
    It may be more touchy in dialogue, but at least the commas are just as important, if not more so, in dialogue. Considering you have to be able to actually pronounce the entire statement in a single breath?
    You can use spelling as a means to put different dialects into play, but then you still have to be very carefull, in order to stick with it.
    If you read my story, you'd notice I'm playing with the dialects, in place of languages. I don't expect anyone here to be fluent enough in all the languages, but you can still read the story, since I'm just working with dialects of english in its stead.
    You may notice that 'John Doe', is speaking American English, as opposing the general Queens English. Not to mention all the other people, who are living on various places of this World.
    If you point out a few cases, you made your point, it's up to them how to take it.
    The rules of Punctuation, generally still apply, the comma is a comma, the Semi comma, has it's specific place, and so on and so forth*giggles*
    I gu4ess I can see the point. I commonly repply on every comment, no matter what, just to thank for the comment, then give a repply to the comment, pointing out agreement, or reason why I did the way I did it.
    I guess I wish you'd read the story "Eponey - the Millenium Bug", since I may need some comments on the entire story.
    I still need comments on each chapter/story, to give me hints on what I can, or need to fix with the individual parts as well.
    Writing is supposed to be fun. Besides, once you put pen to paper, you can place the inner demons there, trapping them in a manner of speaking. They're usually much easier to deal with, once trapped on the paper.
    Besides, it's fun to have a good conversation with someone from time to time, a rant or to comes wiht it. Can be more fun, youcan't really say much in a few lines?
    August 1st, 2012 at 10:30am
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    Omg your makeup is cool in a extremely gory way.Holy tamoly! I wanna learn how to do that.
    LOL, I use to use bodycare makeup when i started off, the makeup had no pigments, no resistance, it wore off in seconds, and just blergh. I got into makeup about three years ago, when I was in college. Till college I was a tomboy, I'm talking no pride in my appearance, plain jane,nothing going for myself.Then in college i discovered a lot of myself, like writing, music, makeup. It just hit me that I was good at other things apart from soccer/football. thats really the story
    July 31st, 2012 at 08:23pm
  • the4PonyGirls

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    I guess it can be quite the art to critique someone. in part, it mayhelp to know the writer, though. help you avoiding the pit-falls*giglge*
    That's always good.
    The more of the gallery the story is, the more I enjoy reccing it*giggles* more fun reading. It's refreshing to find these, gives some inspiration on how to 'Colour' your story. Even if I may not write like these.
    Ah, yeah. should be good for the entire night, it's not as if the effect run off, minute by minute.
    Oh, Yikes, that'd suck. Nopoint in drinking fast, you only ruin it. Mood needs to built up slow, and with quite the care. It's the froiends you have around, who help you in, along with your expectations of the effects.
    If they don't want to say, your story will suffer.
    I guess they forget that point?
    I don't mind to have an upcoming argument, so long as the mood remain civil and calm.
    Sometimes it can be quite refreshing to get a comment where they point out a few errors, just like you may feel the same, when you find the 'Tide-bits', to point out. If none had said, your comment may help all the more.
    July 30th, 2012 at 11:55pm
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    You're quite welcome.
    I like to make a good comment, every time, hoping they will be worth the effort.
    From thatperspective I hope for some small typoes spread out, and a few details to pick at.
    Yet, from the readers perspective, I hope for an interesting story, that feels as if I'm there, with a language and vocabulary that makes it feel as if you had painted it in oils*giggles*
    you never get too many of these, just like you never aford to actually buy any of them in real life.

    On the other note, challenge yourself to see how long you can last on 2 glasses, considering that an glass of beer is half a liter, or a pint, depending on where you life, I guess?
    Not that I'm the expert, but still, I love leaving the tide-bits, now and then.

    Since it's your story, it's still up toyou, to make of it, what you want.

    The swap comments need be no less, then any of the other comments, for all I care.
    July 30th, 2012 at 11:14pm
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    Yes yes, put a picture up on your display picture so I can have a look :D
    Hey, once you started working you'll be able to fund yourself. My mum bought me all my makeup. She saw I had an interest in makeup, and she got me started onto it asap. Then now I make money and I can buy some stuff myself. Would you believe I started off with my mothers run downs? I'm talking makeup from the 1995 lol.
    <3
    July 27th, 2012 at 12:36am
  • CaitlinLikeWhoa

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    Oh, no. Not at all! Haha. I completely understand. Some things just aren't your taste and that's not a big deal. I'm mostly writing it for myself anyway, so what other people think totally doesn't matter for the most part. Everyone has their own preferences. But thanks, both for your honest opinion and for wishing me good luck. :) Good luck on your stories as well.
    July 26th, 2012 at 09:57am
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    I really appreciate your comment. It's nice to see a legitimate critique for once. I hope you don't take offense to it, but I don't think I'll use any of your advice. Though it's great to hear for sure (not trying to hate or anything, I swear), it's just not how I want things. He's supposed to fall for her fast. That's part of her personality, and part of what makes their relationship so special.

    I also learned different grammar rules than you, or so it seems. I'm not saying your way is necessarily wrong, just that I was taught to handle punctuation differently. I also don't do distopian; it's just not my style.

    I hope this isn't coming off as harsh because I'm definitely thanking you for your input. It's always great to know what other people think, but most of your suggestions just don't flow with how I like to write. I will make sure to go back and edit through the smaller stuff, though. Thanks for bringing that to my attention. Thanks again for your comment and I'm glad you let me know what you thought. :)
    July 26th, 2012 at 09:34am
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    Got better things to worry about then bitches who cant keep it together and PMS 24 bloody 7
    my maa says I should care just a tad bit, but I'm like mum I've been dealing with the same shit from the same girl since I was 17, I'm done with drama.DONE!

    omg sugarpill are just amazing, their products dont even require a fixer, so amazing. You should show me some of your work bubba, I bet your amazing, seeing your like what qualified? I'm not even qualified. I've been working on my singing, gonna put some vids up soon, see if I've gotten any better ;D
    July 26th, 2012 at 12:48am
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    OH and I use my hands to create the edges. I find most clients dont like the thought of tape on their faces.
    And henna takes me atleast 10 minutes, depending on how large and detailed a person wants it.Really depends on what someones getting.
    July 25th, 2012 at 06:28pm