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yummy yum!! ^^

... um... okay but I'll have my dog take a bit first. Here ya go Bo *gives brownie to dog* ... he seems to be fine... *takes a bite* yum wat's in this? lol

*evil grin* do you want some milk to wash that down? hehe

Dont worry, absolutely none taken. I feel like that too, I think that's why it's become so stupid because my heart isn't in it as much any more you know? I think I'll try a few more chapters otherwise I'll just delete it and create an epilogue for Cant Have You, you know? Thanks for the criticism though, it's really appreciated, that's what means the most to me when people have the guts to say something that might even offend the author, you guys just want it to be better and I do too, so I'll try but who knows what might happen.

Thank you. =]

hehe I was bored so I decided to comment on your profile... um.. idk wat to say... how about this: Hi!! *waves franticly* I know you!! *hands cookie* eat it it's chocolate chip and took me all day to make it's safe I promise

Did I make your day? 'Cause it sounded like I did, haha. The next one is gonna be a little tricky to write, so it might take awhile. I'm afraid I'm gonna mess it up. Hmm...

Olivia =]

As for the Dagan-Kai question, check out my Hotmail page, i have a couple pictures on there, andone of them is is the basic form of a Dagan-Kai

I thought I told it, but Alexx is 18 years old, and second, that's what making a story is all about! A story is supposed to challenge the main characters, and I have PLENTY of challenges that will chew Alexx and his friends (Alexx especially) and spit them (and him) out.

I'm typing right now! Haha.

Olivia =)

You're welcome! And thank you for the comment, too! Really, please pester me, otherwise I will forget. I swear I have the memory of a beta fish. Gr. Haha.

Olivia =)

Starting to become, yeah. Trust me, he's going to get a lot worse from now on though.

She's not fat but since Theo mentioned she 'might' have gained weight, she thinks she looks like an oversized hippo. Which isn't good because she's as skinny as she has always been.

Theo is starting to show his true colours.. =]

Thank-you!!!!! It's our job as Christians to show the Non-Christians what being saved is all about! No regrets or set-backs. People should see your awesome God in you!

I'm all ears.

btw, just read the stuff about you: the you say (insert); i say (insert). Very interesting!! Love the last statement of it and the entire sheet.

Totally. And when they are Christian, sometimes they're afraid to let it be known or talk about religion. Of course that's good AND bad, but yeah. You've gotta know who you are, you know? And make it a statement ^.^

Okay I can see that, I've disclosed information about alo of others but the main character! I'll fix that in chapter 25

Alexx no longer cool? you'll have to describe what made him not so cool, so i can finally see why the stroy in't so actractive. just be honest, I take critism very well.

No, not random at all. I know what you mean. It's hard finding the "Gospel People" on online and off in the world these days. I'm just glad to know I've already found a few and that at least...1/4 of my friends are the same religion as me! (Church of God in Christ)!!!!

you would not believe the crazy responses i get from jut that one chapter of A vs. V, ONE CHAPER! and here my original stroy is going on 25 chapters, strange... names? yes i make up most of em, others I see used more than once so I figure it's okay. Though right now I don't know which story your talking about in the talk of names. Finally yeah, I'll check out Pink Nails, but just remember, nothing is stupid, God never created stupid, man created stupid. BYE !!! =)