I set up this journal to get comments of what you guys think of my story. How can I improve it, what should I keep? Please, help me. I am a silly thirteen year-old that wants to do better in writing xD Oh, and tell me if you like the characters and what you like about them? Please and gracias :)I will talk Spanish now: wait no. Did you know that Cuban in Japanese is Cubangine...or something. It...