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  • hipster fuck

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    thank you for the story comment :-)
    August 9th, 2012 at 03:12pm
  • swell

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    Hey, just letting you know you have a week to submit your entry in my Drabble Contest! With a twist contest. Let me know if you need to drop out, otherwise please submit your entry soon!
    http://www.mibba.com/Forums/Topic/176946/Drabble-Contest-with-a-twist/
    August 5th, 2012 at 05:45am
  • pearlhunter

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    Yesss!!! That's exactly what its like! Although usually when someone sees it differently, I just give up trying to change it or edit it and just start a new story. I get so bored of writing one storyline so easily anyways, or I think of another idea that I can't fit into the story I'm writing so I start a new one. I've never actually finished a story before, not even a short one but theres always a first time fore everything right?

    But I really do like that interpretation, so who knows, maybe it will make a comeback ;)

    Also, I love your story 'honesty', its absolutely brilliant, so simple and believable and real :) four chapters to go, I can't wait to read them!!!!!
    July 28th, 2012 at 12:03pm
  • pearlhunter

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    I'm so glad you liked 'taking back that which is mine' and thank you so much for the comment. I like fruits basket too, although I watched the anime and then read the manga where it left off; is this story the one about the foolish traveller who ended up with only a head and no eyes so he couldn't see the present the monster gave him?

    Also, I never actually consciously thought about it as being figurative because I already had another plotline in my head, but thanks for saying that, its nice to see how other people read/interpret your stories, because I have no idea what they read like from outside of my head. Thanks again!
    July 26th, 2012 at 07:58pm
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Ahhh, I love trains! I took a trip from... Lord. I don't remember the name of the airport. But I took a day and a half (one way) trip to WhiteFish, Montana with my grandfather last fall. I absolutely loved it. Trains are just so nice; I wish we actually had one closer to where I lived.
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:38pm
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Oh, hello!

    I think a semi-colon would do that sentence just fine actually. Word programs do some odd things--like that zero. It just happens sometimes!

    It was a super cute story, though. I really enjoyed it!
    July 25th, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • femincest

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    I don't see how you couldn't love your name! When I was little I like planned to name my child Lily xD But thank you<3
    What's up?
    July 13th, 2012 at 02:29pm
  • pretty-eyed sarcasm

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    Imperfect? Never, ever. I may, in fact, be a god. It's really just something other people will have to accept.
    July 11th, 2012 at 04:46pm
  • Sheikara

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    Oh you're very welcome, and I hope that your story turns out well.
    July 11th, 2012 at 04:35pm
  • pretty-eyed sarcasm

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    Yikes. We're getting deep here. ABORT, ABORT! We are perfect human beings and we're awesome at everything. That's my story and I'm sticking to it.
    July 11th, 2012 at 03:00am
  • spacejunkie

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    Well, the style isn't the worst part of it. I dumbed that down a little, and added awful words, but I think I mostly just hate what the story is about. I am a gay guy aiming whose idea of writing this kind of stuff is that I should pretty much just describe everything that disgusts me in the most monstrous way possible.
    July 10th, 2012 at 11:47am
  • pretty-eyed sarcasm

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    Oh, that's the worst. You're gone for one second and all of a sudden your characters have gone crazy. The nice thing (or not so nice) thing to remember is that some people in real life are complete bitches. Not that it's pleasant, but they still have reasons. People do absolutely overreact to life.
    July 10th, 2012 at 03:08am
  • Dead Puppeteer

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    You're welcome :)
    I understand some of my characters are the same way.
    July 9th, 2012 at 09:01pm
  • pretty-eyed sarcasm

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    Wow, thank you, thank you, thank you! I'm so glad you liked Blind Fate. I love all of my characters, even those who play 'negative' roles. I think it's important in a realistic story--everyone has motives, everyone has feelings.
    Again, thank you so much!
    July 9th, 2012 at 07:44pm
  • femincest

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    Oh my god, thank you for not hating me!!
    I love your name c: I'm Autumn. What's up?
    July 9th, 2012 at 05:35pm
  • femincest

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    Aww, okay. I'm sorry for being an overbearing bitch. I've just been in a neurotic crazy stressed out mood for the past few days and your comment just sort of threw me into a little "Nobody understands me" tantrum, you know? lmao. I'm sorry. Your story was actually quite good, though.
    July 9th, 2012 at 02:35pm
  • spacejunkie

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    Please do. I wish to be infamous in my shame, ha.
    July 9th, 2012 at 01:41pm
  • Daydreamer09

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    Thank you so much for your comment on my story, 'Being Left To The Flood'. I am so glad you like it, and it means a lot to me, so thank you so much :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 11:06pm
  • femincest

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    Awwwwww thanks for telling me my story was almost meaningless, your comment was so constructive to my incoherent writing skills!!!
    July 8th, 2012 at 12:46pm
  • spacejunkie

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    Hey, thanks! The version on this site is just an unedited first draft. I'll try to put the good version up when I have time.
    July 8th, 2012 at 02:54am