CatherineMary / Comments

Most of the time it's not but I have seen sequels that are better than the original.

It is and that's what I thought about since that's how writer's kill off their characters. I think it was perfect just the way it is and pushing that where he gets to know her is just too much. You left it off perfectly and the way you ended it, you were pretty much clear how much of The End it was. I think you shouldn't do a sequel, people just want you to continue wondering what happens next and then when you finish that they want to know more, it's a never ending story.

Oh wow. that's great and yeah there are a lot of people that really want that romantic notion thrown into there so it's kind of a must haha if you get more readers that way. I can see how something like that can really put a lot of doubt in himself from going from such a healthy (if you want to call it that) frame into a thicker one with a lot more skin. I remember him talking about how he read that if a man gains weight his penis size shrinks or stretches the skin and when he was describing that he looked a little amused when the men cringed haha It sounds totally out of character, but once you realize he's not the same anymore with the extra weight you can see him with a lot more insecurities.

I think that is the only way too if she just completely removed herself from Jared by living in another country. It probably might not work since she is so attached to Jared in that way and can easily hop on a plane and go see him. Whatever she does, she always runs away and then runs back to him.
Whatever ending it is, I'll probably have lots to say haha. It's just someone like Ella I get frustrated after a while and I am like 'just make up your freaking mind. you either want to be with him or you don't' they both have horrible timing when it comes to wanting to fix things or work things out.
So true so whatever ending you decide to post on here is fine.
I think that would be great :) It would be a different mind frame for everyone to see and I was really pulled in by that chapter when he was gaining all that weight and you are so right. He does use his body for a lot of things and now that he couldn't, he can see how much he really did rely on his body for his quality of life. That would be great if you did write a story about that :D please do!

Taking the time to write out your thoughts makes your thinking process expand or that is what happens when I express what I feel about a certain chapter. I like making references because I hate it when they say those things and all I'm thinking is what made it great, what part made you cry? It's not that hard to take the time and write out what you are feeling. There is no right or wrong and doesn't take long to type it out either.

I think if they don't end up together you'll get more feedback haha maybe more than I like the chapter since it didn't end up like they expected it. You do have time to change it and I really believe that Jared relies on Ella too much, emotionally wise he refuses to let her go so he stayed attached her to after all this time instead of moving on. Because if he wanted to move on, he could, it would be hard, but it is possible. I firmly believe there is more than one person that can make you happy because one person out of the billions of people on here and you find them? That's rare, I think there is more than a handful of people out there that someone can end up happy with. Just need to accept it. It's been years and he doesn't seem bored. I think he's just like the emotional distress he puts himself through, he knows what Ella is like and what is is like when they get close. He teases himself in a way going after her for so long. I think so too, it's what Jared is projecting. He seems to love chasing her and when he does have her, it's more subtle and calm, Ella doesn't seem to like that either when he stops 'chasing' her.
haha it's a bit nerve wracking, but she's cautious and ready to learn so she's better than my friend who was nervous the whole time and almost crashed the car twice lol

School has been overtaking my life and I recently just started to teach one of my cousins how to drive and she wants to drive every day so she can get her license before Christmas. So every time I go home I am tired after updating my own stories. I am lagging when it comes to reading all the stories I sub for haha

I don't really see any holes and if there are it's just small one that we can figure out ourselves about Ella. You can be overthinking, but hey you did a really good job at portraying Ella.
Divorce is always a bitch and most of the time isn't as quick as what people want since one person is always refusing to sign the papers wanting to work things out. My parents' divorce was like that, but my mom moved out of the house before they even got a divorce and took us with her...anyways if Adrian catches wind of her and Jared there will be hell to pay and switch his reason of why they are getting a divorce.

Not surprised how he has a string of girlfriends, it's just something that he can't really bury himself with different women. It never works for long and then he goes find another woman. Sad that it's only a temporary remedy and it doens't even get rid of the feelings that much to begin with. Ella is an expert at running, she would definitely win a gold medal for the amount of time she ran from her problems. Soliel does seem to get older pretty quick, but then again the story is moving really fast so it's natural. I haven't seen Mr. Nobody or any of his interviews about it, having kids scares everyone. No, I will spare her since it's not the end of the story yet and if I feel like it then *bang bang* for her haha

Yeah I have gotten a few assignments here and there and some of my classes I haven't even gotten any assignments yet since they are based on taking the tests and that's it. My workload isn't that bad, just like last year a few papers for my other classes, at least six essays in my English which is standard (last English class and I am done. yay!) Hopefully this semester will go smoothly for the both of us.

Oh wow, you do have a pretty long story. Well whatever you do, it's for you because honestly if you don't feel like posting it and you do and you run out of chapters and you are stuck writing your future chapters it just might hinder everyone and wondering where the updates went to. It would be just a huge mess haha

You're right, usually a child brings the two people together which is not the case most of the time. It can also break a family apart because either one or one can not be ready to have kids or to take care of one. I was sad to see that they considered and went through the process of adoption, but it all fits since neither one of them was ready.
I know, right. I am just the main voice what people are probably thinking. Whatever you decide, I can't wait to see how everything ends.
Things have calmed down a bit, I know we are going to start to have test soon since it's been almost a month since I have been back at school. Things are getting back in order so it's not so overwhelming anymore.

Sometimes summing up a story only takes three pages. It's a good thing that you didn't try to force it or try to make the page quota, it probably would have been noticable that you were trying to take up space.
It does, too many times when it comes to one story and I get lazy sometimes when the chapter is really long I just read it in segments so I won't get bored too easily.

Wow that does blow, but college does take time to settle in before it just hits you in the face and suddenly you are just crowded with homework and projects coming out of your wazoo. I won't say that I am lucky but I have been having it pretty easy for the time being, but I know it's going to kick in soon. I already have a quiz for sign language class so I have to prepare for that.

It's okay, I was just wondering what it was and I am not on the computer for that long so I can't do livestream shows or follow bands or anyone for that matter. I get swamped with school, work, friends, boyfriend, and my stories so there is hardly anything left for just me time. It does sound interesting, sadly I think I will forget about it in a few days when I go back to school. What I meant was when I am dead tired I ask questions about the story that have already been written, so if I ask about if Jared and Ella finally got together and I just read your latest chapter, its' more of a 'duh' moment for me. That's what I was trying to say.

That doesn't sound too bad, nothing too heavy. I already have to write a fifteen page paper for my English class lol Critical Thinking class sucks, but that is what I get for signing up for Honor's English. No thank you, I rather not spoil what thoughts that have been brewing in my mind about Ella and Jared, I already have things settled before the next chapter is posted. I have no idea what VyRT means XD I am so out of it this week that I totally forget what I have read for stories on here and I always ask the authors stupid questions that have already been established in the story.

Most of my first day consist of starting reading the first chapter in class and lecturing. Not one of my classed were relaxed lol at least you have time to write because of the time you have.

I understand where he is coming from he dealt with a whirlwind of emotions dealing with Ella and he snapped. I hope you finish too because school started for me and I don't have time to write ss much since I'm putting my effort into school.
Yes Haha people always wonder where I am since I read it hours or the day the chapter is posted. The workload isn't so Bsd right now since we are just starting the first chapter and reviewing in some. I hope you have a great time in your classes.

I figured as much she will hold something back. Thinking about it, Ella would just let Cameron get a little peek into her past before shutting it close again. Opening up completely as serious as she was, I don't think she would have. That's all Ella can do to be honest, no one can really just open up that much and expect not to get burned. A lot of people are cautious, so I understand with Ella.
Cameron seems like a really nice woman and I doubt someone like him would withstand someone like that like you said and ask her to marry him. Who knows what happened there, dont' really care much all is in the past.

Yay break time lol jk, alright I will check out your tumblr if you don't post tomorrow. Thanks

Whatever time you have, it's alright. You won't know until you get into the groove of the semester. I thought I was going to have a lot of time last semester for my stories and I didn't update for months. I totally understand if you drop off the face of the Earth because i might do so as well when it comes to updating.

Oh that is handy and wonderful, but I rarely get in advance with my stories and I used to be at least five chapters ahead, but then I just stopped since I had too much on my plate and continued posting without writing another chapter. So yeah, didn't work out as well as I thought.

Ella is a complex character XD but I love her nonetheless because she is difficult to write and writing the right reactions in the right moments are crucial. Oh wow you are moving back to TX, for what? School? It's about that time where everyone is moving back to their universities, no need for me moving since my school is fifteen minutes away from me. I don't understand that term since I don't use my tumblr, the same one my friend force me to create and just lost interest in it after ten minutes of messing with it. No, no that's okay. haha I come up with my own conclusions whatever I am given and still am shocked when things are written differently. I do the same with the people who comment on mine, I give them a little bit more info on the story than I should.

I think her making a joke out of it seems more like her. I think she can either stay how she is over the years or slowly start to show her true self and get serious for once and expressionlessly share her story or how she feels or whatever you want to add with that. I love it when you found your way out of the hole you are digging yourself into with stories haha. Good for you and can't wait to see what you have come up with. Ugh, why tell me that woman now I am bouncing in my seat thinking of all the possibilities you can come up with during that time. Must suck and yes ma'am. I will gladly shed some light for your story when I update.

No there is no other way than to be sappy when you are being as raw and real as Jared was. That's a good amount of time since it's a year within a chapter and they were together for what 3 to 4 years or something like that. Alright, lol I guess I can wait for that to happen. You know what baffles me is that I am the only one commenting. What's up with that?! Well, tell you what. with my more demanding stories I'll promote Troubled Youth to see if they will leave some comments for ya :)