Thank you so much for your comment on You Win! I really appreciate it. (:
It's nice to hear what other people are thinking when they're reading it, especially if you read it straight through.
Thanks for the comment! The story is actually about someone who's been raised from hell. The main character, the 'he' that keeps being mentioned, was raised from the dead, and his lover, partner in crime, his best friend, 'you,' is wondering, kind of forcing himself to wonder if it's too good to be true.
Oh sweet goodness, I KNOW this is late... but thank you for the band recommendation! I did not know Stars existed until you left me that comment, and I had Dead Hearts on repeat for a good three days, I swear. You did get me writing, just so you know. (I actually started working on the first chapter of the sequel instead of parts of later chapters :p) So, hopefully since I've got tomorrow off and most people are going back to their colleges I'll be able to go back to being a hermit and finish the first chapter.
I just wanted to say thank you, and I really like the band! :D
ASdgasf. I'm sorry this is so late, but thank you so so much for the comment! I was hoping the reveal of the true culprit would go over well, and I'm just hoping you enjoyed reading it as much as I did writing it! Again, thank you thank you thank you! <3
Thank you for the comment, I love all the feedback!
Maybe I'll write a sequel to tie up the loose ends of her disappearance. I had written an alternative ending where the wings did burst through her skin, but it didn't work that well with the story.
Although I do like the idea of her smiling beforehand....I might do that as well hahah! :D
I just wanted to stop by and tell you how much I appreciate your comment on Chex Mix! Such a detailed comment, I'd love for your feedback all the time:D
Ohh, well, if I can double up then I'd like comments on this story http://stories.mibba.com/read/401241/Poet/ and this story http://stories.mibba.com/read/384376/My-Sisters-Money/ please :)
Oh...you have given me so many beauitufl comments on my stories. Thank you so much. I wish I could thank you properly, but I can't seem to stop drooling long enough to actually THINK. My brain is one big blushy blob. Thank you very, very much.