So, for the few souls that do enjoy that piece of me where somebody suffers(most commonly known as "Shut Up"), I am going to rewrite it. Don't ask me why. Or do. Okay, don't be so persistent.Well, I feel I haven't written it as well as it deserves to be written. The idea is grand in my head, though on paper it's...not grand at all. Maybe it's because I began writing it when I was less...let's say...