Josie. / Comments

Thank you for the story comment doll! <3

Wow I just took stupid to a new level. Haha

Thanks for th3 comment on "Eponey 3"
so far as I understand, you only need to read a single chapter in the first place.
Nice to see someone else enjoying the layout, I made for the story, (it's the same for the entire story).
I may have to consider adding some extra details about the story, as posted separately
Still, there is room for a little more concrete detail in the comment?
Not sure if it adds any to point out her age, and her school in this event?
I had included refference to the latest event they were on.
Leaving too much details is defeting the girlish perspective. all 3 girls are 7 years old, so they're not quite as disiplined in observation as an adult.
I hope they act their age, or I'll have to remind them.
If you like the story, reading a few more chapters, wouldn't take all that much time?
Finally, would you prefer longer chapters, of short once, like this? (I'm curious)
Oh, and happy reading. hope you're as fond of reading, as you're of writing, which it seems you're doing alot?

Hey! Can I just say your comment on Four Corners and Two Sides made me smile so hard because the pacing was something I was really worried about. A lot of people don't understand that the only thing wrong with their story might just be their pacing. It irks me when things are rushed, and that was what I was hoping to prevent. Thank you for bringing that up because that is one of the most important things in this story so I appreciate it :3

Hey, thank you for your comment on my story! I realized after receiving a lot of comments about it that I did not add enough description to my chapters and characters. I recently just finished updating the story with some new added details and descriptions and more movement between dialogues which should hopefully make it better. I would love it if you would check out my redone chapters! Thanks!

Thank you for the wonderful story comment on Lilith. (: I appreciate your criticism, and will work on what you suggested! I was just in a little hurry to get some stuff posted and hear back on it. This story has caused a lot of frustration for me, so it's good to get some feedback on it now. Thank you!

i know exactly what you mean.
the spinner/hj thing went on to the episode where he got shot but stopped when she met declan. but i understood that though because he had jane since the beginning so holly could never have him in the first place. unless she wanted to get beat up. lol so i prefer both, actually, now that i really think about it.

Yeah, okay. I'm just saying. It was good, but difficult for me to get to know the characters and really connect with what they were feeling.

Those of us who have never seen the show don't know anything about them. So you're narrowing down your readers greatly by not describing them.

Aha, thank you very much. I makes me happy that someone actually reads my story now. I hope to have the next chapter sometime this weekend - if not then it'll be every Monday. c:
Thank you for the story comment, it means a lot.

Alright. I just added you under Steve Rogers. Thanks for entering :)

hmmppphhhh... MSN isn't opening, my headaches gone :D I have work in like 10 minutes, and I might have thought of a story idea for that fan fiction that we were talking about the other day... the one in which I said I would probably die if I wrote it but we would have to take that chance to be awesome? xD

Anyways. yeah. LOVERS YOOOOUUUUUU. I'll be home by 8:30 have dinner on the table :O

pppffffffttttt. <3

I love you too doll. :)

Thank you for the story comment <3

VV i have no clue what that was >.< I felt like singing? xD

JIMMY cracks corn and I don't care.
Jimmy cracks corn, and I DON'T CARE.
Jimmy cracks corn and.. hey... we don't care
so jimmy go crack your fuckin corn
cause we don't care :O

*hmm hmmm hmmmm*

Love you beautiful <3

I sometimes set my alarm early so I can get up early just to curl back up and sleep until my real time. xD It's tricking my mind BUT WHAT THE HELL, WHY NOT? :P

Oh my god :O I slept till freaking noon >.< It's been a while since I've slept this much I've out done myself! xD I have to go to work in about an hour and a half so I'm only checking my sites. *grumbles* TUESDAY NEEDS TO COME

FERRRREEETTTTTT