I Fall, I won, I Lost, I Have, You’re Gone - Comments

  • PaulWunsch

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    I've learned that even when you're going through the hardest times in your life, there will always be people around you who love you and support you so don't lose hope, because it's a very easy thing to do. And if you have any doubt about it then just ask yourself this question: What would my dad do? Would he let his sadness get the better of him? Or would he stay strong for me? I need best cv writing services australia to complete my writing work and to get resume written from them.
    July 27th, 2022 at 02:01pm
  • heart-and-soul

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    I have lost this fight for life.
    I have won the right to cry at night.
    I have lost the light in my eyes;

    those 3 lines have so much emotion behind them you can really feel it! love this
    November 30th, 2019 at 07:33pm
  • Puffer

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    Nicely written. :)
    August 16th, 2009 at 03:28pm
  • Crafty Old Crone

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    It hurts to read this - that's how good it is - it feels like it should be a lyric, have you tried putting it to music? It think it is stunning.
    May 9th, 2008 at 03:48pm