I Fall, I won, I Lost, I Have, You’re Gone - Comments

  • heart-and-soul

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    I have lost this fight for life.
    I have won the right to cry at night.
    I have lost the light in my eyes;

    those 3 lines have so much emotion behind them you can really feel it! love this
    November 30th, 2019 at 07:33pm
  • Puffer

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    Nicely written. :)
    August 16th, 2009 at 03:28pm
  • Crafty Old Crone

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    It hurts to read this - that's how good it is - it feels like it should be a lyric, have you tried putting it to music? It think it is stunning.
    May 9th, 2008 at 03:48pm