Spinning round and round - Comments

  • dreaming dawn

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    I really love the very first two versus. I say versus because it almost sounds like a song and I really loved the lyrical feel of it. When I got to the last verse, I was hoping for something similar, but it was not. Not to say it was not brilliant, but I just felt like the last verse was a little.. out of place? However, the word choices were wonderful through and I thoroughly enjoyed it.
    January 2nd, 2011 at 06:31am
  • galaxy defender

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    wow.
    i was captivated.
    just, wow.
    :)
    November 26th, 2010 at 12:02am
  • chana300

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    I love the context of this poem is amazingly beautiful
    October 17th, 2010 at 11:38pm
  • Deanie

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    I really love it! You connected real life to dreams and you are right dreams can come true. I like how you used sayings to make your very own poem. Very original
    September 20th, 2010 at 06:25pm
  • Violet Ice

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    This took me somewhere else; fantastic!
    September 6th, 2010 at 09:35pm
  • The Devil's Reject;

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    amazing babee (:
    I love this one, it's my all time fave<3
    May 30th, 2010 at 10:29pm
  • all for believing.

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    This is such a sweet poem!

    My favorite lines are, "They say never give up,
    but always be ready to fall.
    They say never put your head,
    where the rest of you can't follow."

    You incorperated the realistic expectations of others with what REALLY happens. With true reality. And it's beautiful. :)
    November 5th, 2009 at 03:07am
  • beautifullydisturbed

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    and you said I was good... you're amazing! I love this... :)
    June 8th, 2009 at 08:38pm
  • Ave.Maria.

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    Long, but hopefully worth it?
    June 7th, 2009 at 06:49pm