Spinning round and round - Comments

I really love the very first two versus. I say versus because it almost sounds like a song and I really loved the lyrical feel of it. When I got to the last verse, I was hoping for something similar, but it was not. Not to say it was not brilliant, but I just felt like the last verse was a little.. out of place? However, the word choices were wonderful through and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

wow.
i was captivated.
just, wow.
:)

I love the context of this poem is amazingly beautiful

I really love it! You connected real life to dreams and you are right dreams can come true. I like how you used sayings to make your very own poem. Very original

This took me somewhere else; fantastic!

amazing babee (:
I love this one, it's my all time fave<3

This is such a sweet poem!

My favorite lines are, "They say never give up,
but always be ready to fall.
They say never put your head,
where the rest of you can't follow."

You incorperated the realistic expectations of others with what REALLY happens. With true reality. And it's beautiful. :)

and you said I was good... you're amazing! I love this... :)

Long, but hopefully worth it?