This reminds me of the song and the clip called Las Vegas. You know what i am talking about, yes? You know the movie that you watched called Las Vegas? But this is the poem I liked more than all the others I've read so far. Continue!
wow that was very good! the whole over all metaphor was great but in the end when you suggested that the maker of this world is playing a game of chance with out lives, thats an interesting way to look at it. good job!