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  • Quiescent.

    Quiescent. (125)

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    Honestly, this was thought-filled. I'm just wondering: Did this come from anything, it seems you were fighting something at the time you wrote this?

    There was a word missing, at least it seems there is: "You ever what could possibly..." Is there meant to be 'wonder' between 'ever' and 'what'?

    It was magnificent. -thumbs up-
    July 18th, 2010 at 03:40am
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