The Lost Sinner - Comments

DC_Marvel_Girl (100)

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I really like this poem, and I would count this as a poem. Poems don't haave to have a rhythem and they don't have to flow, they just have to express a feeling which you did (at least to me). Again, this was great.

March 30th, 2010 at 07:43pm

xiluvmusicx (110)

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That is some powerful stuff. Wow. =)

August 5th, 2009 at 11:44pm

WordsOfTheWorld (100)

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Like Walton87 said pretty strong words. But I wouldn'tclass this as a poem it doesn't flow or have a rhythem. To me its just more a list of statements. It has no actual pattern of rhyme.

July 3rd, 2009 at 10:19pm

walton87 (100)

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strong words

June 27th, 2009 at 12:57pm