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  • whyamistillonhere

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    Why does this not have any comments? Honestly, I think this is one of your best. What, if I may ask, inspired you to write this?

    I like this style, it's short and to the point, and packs so much meaning. This bit right here is my favorite part:

    "And you will say clearly I was gone too soon.
    But here I am happy; it shows in my face,
    The starlit reflections that cover my space.

    Do not ever doubt that I'll be gone forever"

    Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more of your poems in the future :-)
    August 27th, 2009 at 10:04pm
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