Two Paths - Comments

AHHHH!!!!! i really like when you finished off with "its suicide" and i like the deep thought at the end with the 2 choices. i like how it is but i also woulldnt mind seeing it in a ryhming format, and i think you shud make a longer poem (: you have great thoughts that come out and wouldnt mind seeing more of what you have! keep writing thats all im asking haha

that's good.

I love morbid poetry with overflowing emotion. <3
Check out my stuff, I think you might like it.
And if not, you're still a great poet.

i like it, its very deep in a good way tho