Alright, I'm sorry that this particular poem hasn't been organized in stanzas and whatnot, but when I wrote this, I wasn't really thinking about the rhyming scheme or the "beat" as you'd have it. All I was trying to do was get this...raw emotion out in words as they came to me while I was still feeling it. Mind you, there is some rhyming buried down in there somewhere so I still consider this some kind of poem.
That aside, I hope whoever comes here doesn't leave automatically upon seeing a chunk of words through together in a few seemingly ongoing sentences. This right here is like a thought and it's how the words actually came to me as I wrote the poem.
I hope you guys like it, and I would LOVE comments. I'll even do my best to return the favor. ^_^
Alright, I'm sorry that this particular poem hasn't been organized in stanzas and whatnot, but when I wrote this, I wasn't really thinking about the rhyming scheme or the "beat" as you'd have it. All I was trying to do was get this...raw emotion out in words as they came to me while I was still feeling it. Mind you, there is some rhyming buried down in there somewhere so I still consider this some kind of poem.
That aside, I hope whoever comes here doesn't leave automatically upon seeing a chunk of words through together in a few seemingly ongoing sentences. This right here is like a thought and it's how the words actually came to me as I wrote the poem.
I hope you guys like it, and I would LOVE comments. I'll even do my best to return the favor. ^_^
peace&love
~CI