Lemon Sun and Impending Doom. - Comments

  • Most of my poetry is for people to get what they want out of it. I sometimes just come up with a line and work with it, and draw it out til' it's a poem. I came up with Lemon Sun and Impending Doom (which is actually a whole anthology now) and it was all about extreme contrast. But emotion, whatever it may be, I try to have some in there.
    September 9th, 2007 at 01:50pm
  • this seems a really fast poem (and I like it)
    But is it about the knowlege of a relationship about to fail and just dreading the moment which it does?
    because thats the vibe I get off it (yeah, its a complex vibe :D)
    September 9th, 2007 at 07:47am