Drunk - Comments

Fuck this is totally sick!!! *claps*. Love it. Alot of poems on mibba are boring me. You give me hope oh poetic one, that there are such people who possess the power of rhythme and words
Hoping to hear more of you.

Your lines are ill,
drop em and spill
ya guts out
make me nut out
I try to keep it steady
but ya quake is heavy
i'm gonna fall,
to the floor
like your bloody victims at the door
waiting in line
to hear your rhyme
your illmatic
you'll make me a finatic
i need to cancel my other subscriptions, then they'll probably be bitchin.
But i've found a new shakespeare
Not a britney spear
so anytime
drop me a dime
of ya rhyme
This is the quote
poems float ma boat
if they're good
and understood...

Gosh i have no idea. Lol. sorry i felt like freestyling that i'm so lost. :P i couldn't even end it. *sigh*

That was just insanely fantastic. Bravo. :)

Wow, that was amazing. =D

that would make such a great chorus in a song. beautiful.

yay thank you!

Short, but powerful. It's a great metaphor. Brilliant! Bravo.

Wow, just wow. -claps-

wow
that was freaking incredible
i don't think i'm ever going to find a poem like this one
it was beautiful

debbie x

Amazing.