Lullaby - Comments

This was the one I was waiting the most for! Just now I reviewed the message you sent me, the one with the unpolished poem that was entitled "The Tragedy of Casey" and definitely, without any questions, this is better! So glad you were able to finish it and with flying colors! I salute you, and I'm sure they would be proud to read this. =)

Right, just before my laptop battery does on me, I have to say Brandon - you know what? I don't think you could've written anything more beautiful and affecting. It's took me a while, but my eyes are square as I haven't took them away from the screen. It's so tragically beautiful. Daniel and Casey had such an amazing love that was ended with the quick shot of a gun. That's how quickly life can end; that's how quickly life can be taken away. Seriously, truthfully, honestly wonderful to read. Again, you have bought a tear to me eyes and have made my heart beat faster than normal. I was there in this poem. I was with Daniel and I felt his pain. That's how awesome your writing is. I don't feel like I am reading; I feel like I am living it!

Love you and everything you do, always and forever

So awfully beautiful. Amazing work

wow just wow it was beautiful