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angiesaysrelax
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i really love the style in which you wrtie
It flows so well
July 2nd, 2008 at 05:53pm
Pure Sex.
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Wow. I really liked this =]
your a great writer
November 23rd, 2007 at 06:26am
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I like this.
The punctuation is a little off but I can cope with that.
[i]So hit the lights and shine
them upon yourself to reveal
your beauty that's actually quite ugly
so here I am[/i]
I love what you are saying in these lines.
Also, I would say that if you tried to add more imagery into your poems they would be even more fantastic.
November 5th, 2007 at 12:33am
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same, It would make an awesome song
October 30th, 2007 at 10:11am
the dream maker.
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This would make a really good song. I love all your poems, it's unlike all the other poems I've read on here. Good job!
October 30th, 2007 at 06:01am
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It flows so well