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  • angiesaysrelax

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    i really love the style in which you wrtie
    It flows so well
    July 2nd, 2008 at 05:53pm
  • Pure Sex.

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    Wow. I really liked this =]
    your a great writer
    November 23rd, 2007 at 06:26am
  • The Master

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    I like this.

    The punctuation is a little off but I can cope with that.

    [i]So hit the lights and shine
    them upon yourself to reveal
    your beauty that's actually quite ugly
    so here I am[/i]

    I love what you are saying in these lines.

    Also, I would say that if you tried to add more imagery into your poems they would be even more fantastic.
    November 5th, 2007 at 12:33am
  • Sazor

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    same, It would make an awesome song
    October 30th, 2007 at 10:11am
  • the dream maker.

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    This would make a really good song. I love all your poems, it's unlike all the other poems I've read on here. Good job!
    October 30th, 2007 at 06:01am