January 17th, 2013 at 03:00am
Rebellion - Comments
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goodness me that was amazing... so many quotable lines. too many to choose from. loved it!!June 2nd, 2010 at 06:29am
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This was just... wow. It was amazing, honestly. Such eloquence in your wording. The entire thing was truly a sight to behold and a true feast for the mind. Excellently written!May 22nd, 2010 at 01:50am
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If only I could elaborate on how many lines just fit so well in that poem. 'I shall rock this heartless / No not nation, for rhyming obeys constraints but this line overfills and breaks the rules.'
That line is one that I absolutely adore =)
Brilliant work.March 14th, 2010 at 02:18am -
This was beyond beautiful. I wish I could write poetry like you. I think one of my favourite lines was
[i]Skinny bones that let you roam from Rome to Rome
And back again my friend.[/i]
But then again there were a lot that stood out to me. Wonderful job!March 9th, 2010 at 10:48pm -
wow, that was amazing. i loved how it sounded on my tongue, you balanced the rhyming perfectly and it flowed like a waterfall. i loved it. lol, if the rest of the people write like you, it'll be really hard to choose a winner. bravo!February 17th, 2010 at 04:03am
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Dang this is gooooood :)February 16th, 2010 at 07:47am
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Very long, but it was worth it! :]January 14th, 2010 at 02:42am
This is a beautiful poem. And I think it'll always haunt me because I'll always understand it, but I won't understand why. Damn. My vocabulary isn't large enough to describe it and record it to memory. But I want to. I really, really want to.