the Last Straw. - Comments

  • Americanaa

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    The flow of this poem is great. And I love the way you use your words.
    Overall: Great!
    February 1st, 2010 at 02:34am
  • FlyMeToTheMoon

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    I really really like this!
    It is very good, i really like the flow it has and the natural meaning.
    keep writing :)

    check out my newest poem.!
    January 27th, 2010 at 02:40am
  • BrightBlue

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    I loved it. So much meaning. I love poetry when it's raw like this.
    January 27th, 2010 at 02:20am