Where Were You? - Comments

I really like this actually. It's very real and emotional, and I love the flow of it and the repitition of the line "where were you?" brings home the emotional theme and also adds a nice rhythm to the piece when one reads it.

Sorry for the double post. Mibba's misbehaving!

Reallly good :]

I have felt this way before. Just thinking about it brings a little pain but reading this made it heal. Very nicely written, keep it up. :)

Pure emotion, lovely.

i think this is so good. it's true, im pretty sure everyone has had their heartbroken at one point,

this is really good...shows true feelings that people can easily relate <3