Eye of the Beholder - Comments

  • Deanie

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    I like it, but out of the other poems you've written this didn't mean as much to me as the others did.
    September 21st, 2010 at 05:18pm
  • Alibi

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    This is absolutely beautiful, I loved it. :) Especially the last line.
    September 15th, 2010 at 09:25am
  • Elijah Jane

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    "Just like everything else, we touched it and it was destroyed."

    Yessssss.....

    I didn't much like the beginning (pretty basic and predictable), but I do like that line.

    E.
    February 9th, 2010 at 09:24pm
  • florence

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    Wow... this is just, wow. I like this poem a lot, mostly because you take an already uncommon and deep idea and add to it. Good job!
    February 9th, 2010 at 07:18pm