Whatever it takes - Comments

  • Deanie

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    I really love the first verse of seeking inner beauty. Not many people do that anymore they are too busy looking on the outside. It really touches me.
    September 22nd, 2010 at 06:04pm
  • tiggledpinkis

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    The line about "eternal slumber" sort of reminded me of a fairy tale ending. Not a happy one, but magical, nonetheless.

    The poem's beautiful.
    June 7th, 2010 at 03:45pm
  • florence

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    This is good! I love the emotion and love you use in it, especially the metaphors you hint at.
    February 9th, 2010 at 07:22pm