A Knight of Dreams - Comments

I love how you wrote this. It flows pretty well, but seemed more of a story themed poem, maybe even narrative. It's not too emotional, but your description and just the sheer way you word things in this poem is amazing. The beginning turned slightly more frightening as it neared towards the middle, a change in tone, but I think you summed it up well at the end to make up for that. Kinda like a happy ending on a roller coaster ride. And I liked the part with the stardust the best. (:

[b]Retell a Nursery Rhyme Contest[/b]
I'm not really good at commenting on poems.
There are a few typos:
[i]Unless [its] someone else’s find.[/i] - “it's”
[i]And make all the [mosters] take leave.[/i] - “monsters”

This was a cute poem because of the happy ending for the boy. I kind of liked it. I know this comment is a bit sucky, but I'll ask my friend who's good at poems to comment on this too. Thanks for joining my contest! :)

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