I love that this is an acrostic. You did a splendid job of making it flow well despite the added limitations of an acrostic, making it interesting and beautiful. My favorite lines were probably,
Take my hand and lead me through
All these gardens of wilting souls
Something about that is just striking. A hopeless sort of imagery, full of different emotions every time I read it. I don't know if that was intended, but it's what happened.
So anyway, I love this poem! Great job. You're an excellent writer! :D
Take my hand and lead me through
All these gardens of wilting souls
Something about that is just striking. A hopeless sort of imagery, full of different emotions every time I read it. I don't know if that was intended, but it's what happened.
So anyway, I love this poem! Great job. You're an excellent writer! :D