A Place To Call Our Home - Comments

  • Yella

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    Thank you for entering my contest. I will PM the winners and post them on the contest forum as well.

    I like the flow and the first two lines brought me in; I agree with them. "And this labyrinth has an exit at the end of the world/ If we believe in the beauty." Now, that's deep. Those two lines, you're basically shinning a light and letting us know that there is hope despite the world we live in.
    November 3rd, 2011 at 09:13am
  • FixTheBrokenPieces

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    This is so deep, and flows so well still. Very well written.
    September 10th, 2011 at 08:20pm
  • Deanie

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    Wow, this is a really great poem, it means so much and all the sadness is really created there! Good job :c)
    May 22nd, 2011 at 03:06pm
  • Ave.Maria.

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    I'm impressed (: This really flows well as a song and the lyrics are really meaningful aswell. A really well written poem.
    January 16th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • amaranthine.

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    yeah if you could that would be great! :)
    June 30th, 2010 at 06:11pm
  • justjenn

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    I love this song so much....Could I write piano sheet music for it? I could send it to you and we can like...make....a song...YEAH!
    June 30th, 2010 at 02:24pm