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  • FixTheBrokenPieces

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    The fifth and sixth line are brilliant. I really, really love this. You have such good literary devices, and description and everything. It's really lovely :)
    September 23rd, 2011 at 04:28am
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    Seriously, that was really inspiring
    June 29th, 2010 at 02:34am
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    That was lyrically beautiful
    June 29th, 2010 at 02:30am
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