Silence - Comments

  • DarkWryter

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    I love how the ending gives the reader a choice to stand up to the silence. Like the silence is not something that is and always will be but something that can be broken if we so desire. at least thats how I interpret it
    October 6th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • Deanie

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    I love it, it has its own beat, like a song, but you separate it clearly from a song and turn it into your own creative poem. i like how silence is a person, not just a thing
    September 26th, 2010 at 07:12pm
  • Nuclear Muse

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    Agh! I always have to comment because I love your poetry! lol. This is very powerful, and the ending is outstanding and memorable! I LOVE how you personified silence.
    July 25th, 2010 at 06:37pm
  • thisisnotaboutme

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    i loved this. it was careful and rhythmic, but different and with actual meaning behind it
    great work :)
    July 10th, 2010 at 10:28pm
  • paintxthexrosesxgrey

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    I like your style. very powerful.
    July 9th, 2010 at 02:50pm