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  • kennedy;

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    Thank you!
    I don't quite have a melody yet, but thank you for the comments about the lyrics. : )
    July 14th, 2010 at 07:15pm
  • Ghostgem102

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    It's pretty good. Defintly always better when you hear the melody. Than you get a good idea of the feel of it. But other wise, the lyrics where pretty good :>
    July 12th, 2010 at 06:33am
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