-Judging for a contest-
Your writing style was great. The metaphors used in this poem produced beautiful imagery and I loved the sweetness of this poem. I feel like you could have written more..like the story isn’t finished yet. Other than that, solid effort. Well done! :)
Your writing style was great. The metaphors used in this poem produced beautiful imagery and I loved the sweetness of this poem. I feel like you could have written more..like the story isn’t finished yet. Other than that, solid effort. Well done! :)