The Only One - Comments

i like the raw emotion although it could have flown a little bit better
i think i understand the basis of this poem because i have been in a very similar situation
i also know that it is hard to bring yourself away from just writing straight
what i mean by that is that it makes a poem more interesting if you approach it from a metaphorical or story like quality.... if that makes any sense
or i might just be babbeling

Okay. guys, this is my first poem that I'm posting on here.
It's about someone that I met. Tell me what you guys think of it.
I'll take any form of criticism.