this is a really great poem. i think you should change the name of it though so it can catch peoples attention. besides that i loved it. I read it to my friend who was going through the same thing and she told me that she was glad she wasnt the only one that felt like that. thankyou so much, i have been trying to tell my friend for weeks now that she's not the only one and you did it with one poem! this poem really is heartfelt and sad but thats the beauty of it. because life is painful. good job. i'll be looking forward to your next poem!
November 9th, 2010 at 07:19am