I love this poem. The imagery is beautiful, the message is strong as well as the emotions. The only thing I would say is the organization of the poem- I am a big fan of free verse, but I feel like the stanzas should have more flow, more consistency to them.
I know it feels restricting but it actually helps illustrate the emotions and images in your writing.
Anyways, beautiful poem and keep up the great work.
I know it feels restricting but it actually helps illustrate the emotions and images in your writing.
Anyways, beautiful poem and keep up the great work.