september rain. - Comments

  • mfaller

    mfaller (100)

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    I love this poem. The imagery is beautiful, the message is strong as well as the emotions. The only thing I would say is the organization of the poem- I am a big fan of free verse, but I feel like the stanzas should have more flow, more consistency to them.
    I know it feels restricting but it actually helps illustrate the emotions and images in your writing.
    Anyways, beautiful poem and keep up the great work.
    December 28th, 2010 at 05:12am